Shades of Robert Frost! This is by far the best poem I've seen you write. And I think it qualifies for a great folk song lyric as well. Bravo! Kudos! Kisses, and all that rot.
This is you at your lake; I recognize you well as you make poetry of your summer days when you take your walks...Like Jerry said, definitely one of your very best...encore, speach, kudo's, what more can be said...-e-
Ahhh . . . Exquisitely rendered, Jane. There are movement within the words signifying a new day for her, love the last line. One of your very best . . .
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
Dear readers, this is my third book of poems, and inside are a special collection of what have turned out to be not only MY personal favorites, but also the favorites of many of YOU. Some of these have never been available in print before...
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
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I had to save it to my library.
Love,
Connie
Lovely and serene poetry.
Lady Mary Ann
Always,
Deborah
Ron
Mother Natures Lesson To Me:
As Child I Stood at My Front Porch Door Watched
Tornado' Rip Apart Houses 30 Feet Cross Street
Never Touching My Side Street...
Excellent Write On!!
TRASK...
Sometimes we humans need to shed our "skin" of bad memories and inner pain to a new shiny world. A good moral here. Enjoyed!!
Love and blessings,
Linda
So many wonders to see.
Mother Nature teaches us,
How to one with nature be.
I can't say it any better than Jerry and George. This was beautiful.
Michael D.