Well done, Jane; you have effectively shared the experience of "the sea" through your verses here. Your poem reminds me of one that I have posted here at AD (and which you may well have read already). It is titled, "Near the Sea I Breathe." By the way, that last word "breathe" is what I meant in my comment on the poster shared on your page at Facebook yesterday. In any case, thank you for sharing this special time with/by the sea. Love and best wishes,

Regis

YEAH, HIS STRONG WATERS...THEY ALWAYS WIN, BEAUTIFULLY. THANK YOU FOR SHARING, JANE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Isn't this that beach north of San Francisco where Hitchcock got his idea of how to torment Tippy Hedron? Just asking...

An amazing work.

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Kathy

Wow! And you live a sad, sorrowful existence? My eye! Makes me want to be there with you.

Ron

~Jane~
Amazing and unique this poem and image.

Lady Mary Ann

A beautiful treat of picture and verses. Thanks for sharing .
Love
Roseline

Ah! Visual and sound with this poem. Great job!

Sandie

Mother nature at work with helpers

Ahhh . . . But the wet, crash, boom put the zest inside you, and now you can understand and feel the same sensation you felt before even though you have removed yourself from being too close. Superb writing!