Great write some people have it all, some nothing at all, some people lose loved ones more than others, by death, and i'm lucky, I've not lost so many relatives and friends as some other families.
I love this walk along survival's fateful path. Some people have good fortune and drink well from the goodness of life, others are faced with desolation every turn they take. At least this time in this poem, it turned out okay.
Just brilliant. I loved this, Jane, seriously and without exaggeration. You touched a cord in me with this one, perhaps because I have been so long "on the road". And yes, I have laid down for a while and "drank the water from the stream."
John
PS: the rhymes (you know I am a rhymer) work to perfection. Nothing awkward or false. Again, bravissimo, my dear.
SOMETIMES...SOONER, SOMETIMES...LATER, SOMETIMES, UNFORTUNATELY... NEVER. FOR THE BOY MUST BECOME AND MAN AND THE PATH...THE ROAD HOME. FANTASTIC! A KEEPER AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
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Splendid write dear friend.
Lady Mary Ann
Ron
Always,
Deborah
John
PS: the rhymes (you know I am a rhymer) work to perfection. Nothing awkward or false. Again, bravissimo, my dear.
Like I Said Beginning As End You (Humans) All Better
Make Best What You Got Left!
Kool Write On!
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