The mudflats were not the only entities to find the fun. The pleasure in accompanying you is to experience both the cracks and the life-giving rain.
Charlie
Like the desert, no doubt the mudflats exude a certain charm, that you have explored here with deft finesse, like a cool breeze and a spot of rain. Next poem, please . . ., I am waiting patiently !
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
the mudflats sure are purty.
let's have some fun,
and go get dirty.
Michael D.
Charlie
John