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Stranger
by Victoria Randall → (All Poetry by Victoria Randall)
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 I met him on the beach

on a cold September morn,

when the waves were hissing fingers 

and the sun an ancient coin.

 

He held me close to keep me warm

and we watched a far white sail.

He is all my heart could wish for,

if it weren't for his fish's tail.

 


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 Reviews of "Stranger"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 12, 2012
Nice twist aat the end. Thank you for sharing, Victoria. Love and best wishes,d

Regis

Reviewed by Shirley Houston
Reviewed on July 5, 2012
Love!!

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on July 4, 2012
Concise condensation of the romance formula. I really like "and we watched a far white sail." That line holds enomous depth. And your last line sums up the human condition. Very sharp awareness writing. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 4, 2012
Very romantic, right down to the end. ;-) I'm sure it was just a Man o' Tea. For a 2-fer.

Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 4, 2012
Nice twist on the classic mermaid tale of man being enchanted by a mermaid siren on the sea or beside it...simple but well done.
fee


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