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True Commitment
by Kimberly D Shiver → (All Poetry by Kimberly D Shiver)
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I got plenty of it, but nothing to vouch for it. I done gave up too many times, it's in my couch sewed. I got to let my mind explode so you can be the Dora to explore. It's another life, a seed 9 months and now I'm going through labor. Working in the field of faith trying to find reliable, but only so many will love me. Plenty will fall in love with what I do. The crazy part about it is that it's true . I'm learning how to deal with them blues. So reach out to what will forever speak to you.

For why you do what you do most people won't get the clue, but prove it all correct by leaping thru every obstacle. Bombing the landmark of hesitation starting an immigration. Accept this Haitian or just respect the evolving nation. It's an obligation. I'm just trying to pamper your thoughts so take notice of the walk because you'll never get it how I speak it so forget my talk. The new mindset of focus and being more less hopeless. There is life out there and you couldn't kill it if you did everything to choke it. What has been taken for granted is where a second chance is planted. To start only to abandon is a mockery to the game with all the legendary it’s demanding. The heat, can you stand it? Just because they turned on you, are you gone fake it? Make some changes and stop complaining. Stop complaining and make changes. People hate what they don't understand, but your commitment is accurate so can you blame them? Find a way to maintain even when life gives you a reason to quit. Enduring until the end makes it well worth the risk.


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 Reviews of "True Commitment"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 5, 2013
It takes a lot to carry a commitment to the end. Your poem seems to be striving to make it.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 4, 2013
quite well coceived and portrayed here
budd


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