Daddy's Girl (poem) by andrea coltman on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 27, 2004

A wonderful tribute to your father. What a lovely moment captured in the picture. Good write indeed.

~ May Lu a.k.a. Sandie May Angel ~

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2004

nice. yay!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 24, 2004

Enchanting read.
Think all father get stuck in a time warp, seeing their children, still as kids..

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

A beautiful tribute uniquely and wonderfully crafted, Andrea!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

Lovely tribute, Andrea. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

a very clever write. Thanks for sharing

Reviewed by Peter Oszmann

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

To my �Pearl�

Wow! What can an oyster say to a pearl?
You�re my little girl, my sweet little girl.
But as the girl into fair woman grew,
Remember always to thyself be true.
Be a free spirit without any chain,
Although a woman, sweet girl to remain,
Who is cute, sweet, clever, cheeky and smart,
Forever to reside inside my heart;
A special place there ever to enjoy�
...My sweet little girl my pride and true joy�

Thank you for being my daughter!

Lots of love from your old Pops�

Also thanks for your comments under my last posting� you cheeky little�

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Lol!!
If I am daddy�s little girl

And you say I�m your little pearl

Does that make you an oyster?

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

LOL loved the ending of such a delightful write.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

"Does that make you an oyster?" < Precious! Lovely poem, Andrea. Just lovely. What fondness it reflects.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Gorgeous Andrea and a wonderful tribute to your father!
I love the photo....you were sooooo cute :-)

Andrea

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Lovely Ode to your Dad, and a very loving picture, Andrea.

Hope you always remain Daddy's Little Girl.

Reviewed by April Smith (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Very sweet...it made me teary-eyed thinking of my own Daddy! I miss him! Good job...April

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Great family photo and great lines. Thanks.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

This is well written, Andra...That picture is really SWEET!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Sweet write. Cute, clever ending. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Beautiful sentiments, excellent tribute to your Dad...~Z~

Reviewed by Magnus Rater (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Yes!!! If only all us who are Dad could earn such super sentiments! I am sure the oyster will always give security to the pearl! Well done, Andrea! Your thoughts are true gems.

This is for my Dad. A response to his poem written last year on Peter J Oszmann’s Authors Den site “ Andrea’s Pearls Too.” Thank You for being my Dad

Daddy’s Girl