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Sammy
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Sammy

 

Dad, where’s mum gone?

"I’m afraid I don’t know honey"

Dad where’s mum gone?

She’s not been here for a whole week

 

Dad what’s wrong with mum?

I saw her crying this morning

Dad what’s wrong with mum?

She said her life was boring

 

Dad why’s mum packed her bags?

Is she going on holiday?

Dad why’s mum packed her bags?

And why has she nothing to say?

 

Dad why doesn’t mum smile anymore?

Why aren’t we going with her?

Dad why doesn’t mum smile anymore?

Who’s that man I saw with her?

 

© Andrea Coltman

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Sammy"
Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on June 26, 2009
So sad.

Prayers to all concerned.

JMD

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2005
You have clearly defined a heartrending tragedy, through a child's eyes, and in so few sentences...
Great stuff, Andrea!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 27, 2005
you have written of a very unfortunate circumstance that children are left to deal with ... very effective, andrea ...

Reviewed on April 26, 2005
Andrea,

Powerful, so very powerful a write ... the sadness weeps from the page - an exemplary poem!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 25, 2005
ooohhh this one hurts Andrea! Such bittersweet sadness.
A superb write!

Eileen

Reviewed on April 25, 2005
ah Andrea, this is so poignant and moving, how very sad, excellently expressed,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on April 25, 2005
OH Wow! Powerfully painful write Andrea...brutally emotive, subtly done...excellent.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on April 25, 2005
its always hardest on the little ones although everyone suffers from divorce

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 25, 2005
Auch...this touches deeply!!

Because of this "Why" questions...maybe thts why I am still where I am!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 25, 2005
You breach a most universally painful theme effectively, Andrea. Thank you for sharing this emotive and meaningful offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 25, 2005
Ouch this one cuts to the bone and hurts like hell as any parent who's ever gone through a divorce can surely tell you. In this child's innocence speaks the wisdom of the world and I will not lie it brought a heavy sadness to my heart as I remembered having to say goodbye to my own little girl when she was only five. I still feel I made the right decision but it does not make the pain or the guilt any easier to live with. Very just write.

Felix


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