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Night and Day
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Night & Day

 

The sun yawned and stretched its rays

Across the undulating land

Waving goodbye to the sleepless night

Without even offering a hand

 

But one day the moon would take revenge

And bring havoc to this merry soul

He’d undermine this popular lad

He’d show him not to be so glad

 

With no one else to get in his way

The sun performed his duties of the day

He frowned when rain began to fall

And hid when clouds began to play

 

The moon decided what must be said, must be

So, he went to the highest authority

Pleading hard and long for more time

To cover blankets of dark upon the earth

 

He told them of people

How they always longed for bed

But the sun put them under a spell

For when he came out, they were happy

Or so he said

 

The authorities talked long and hard

Determined to amend

For they did not like enmity

But, in the end, they had to send

For the god of the ruling planets

He knew right from wrong

His power was so immense

He’d solve the problem

It wouldn’t take long

 

At last the moon was called forward

To receive the final verdict

He wasn’t sure he liked what he heard

But he’d sit and hear it out

 

According to them he’d have to wait

Until a later date

When it would all be dark

And light would be a thing of the past

 

They couldn’t specify

And certainly didn’t want to terrify

But this would all come to pass

When sun and moon met on yon hill

 

The moon accepted all he heard

And would no longer moan

He’d promised to put up with the sun

For he’d get his way and so couldn’t groan

 

But now the moon had to get on his way

Or else he would be late

For the duties he had to perform

For night had to take over from day

 

© Andrea Coltman

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Night and Day"
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2004
Beautiful well written piece, very well done, take care...Mark x

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 14, 2004
This reads like a story in verse - a ballad. Great! Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by evan horetsky
Reviewed on February 14, 2004
Very beautiful picture, and extremely entertaining piece,
Many loves,
Evan

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on February 13, 2004
A beautiful ballad, Andrea. Great job anthropomorphizing day/night. It brings to mind part of a stanza from my poem, "Father And Son Conversation."

Apollo rides a blazing chariot of gold:
Sky lighting godly hands fiery reins hold,
Whip ingot chargers with hellish glee,
His trip must finish ‘fore night can be!

Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed on February 13, 2004
Wonderful write of the cycle of nature. I enjoyed.

~ May / Sandie ~

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2004
I love this!
one thing about the m0on, he's been in many, many, a poem..

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on February 11, 2004
Fantastic write!!!!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2004
Very creative..great tale....love the picture andrea..floria

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on February 10, 2004
lol.........love it
wish i wrote it.......and thats my highest compliment! pax A

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2004
Most entertaining poem and picture!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 9, 2004
Extremely interesting tale, Andrea. Enjoyed immensely.

Reviewed on February 9, 2004
Beautiful poem and lovely picture, Andrea! BRAVA! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on February 9, 2004
This was excellent, absolutely loved that picture,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2004
Wonderful story!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 9, 2004
Excellent Andrea!!

Wow!! Melikes this!!

Love Tinka


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