Pulse (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 2, 2005

Kate,

Your pulse thunders in powerful beats--massaging my soul! Fantastic poetry here--WISH I WROTE IT!!!!!!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 2, 2005

Quite a passionate poetic pulse here, Kate!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 2, 2005

Your images are always sublime and these certainly match the pulse of your poem! Lovely Kate!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Pacific Ink (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2005

EXCELLENT imagery and perspective...I see a problem with "sun" in penultimate strophe, and "loved" in last line...

Pacific Ink

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on August 2, 2005

Romantically throbbing as in the pulse hehe were still in Spain then? lol Only kidding, it's a wonderful write Kate.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 1, 2005

wow this sounds familiar ... exceptional images, Kate ...

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on August 1, 2005

Powerful images, Kate, I could feel the sand between my toes and taste the salty air. Gorgeous poem!!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on August 1, 2005

Sounds like moonlight loving! Excellent imagery, Kate!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 1, 2005

You transport the reader to a serene and idyllic scene Kate
Leisurely and relaxed atmosphere simulated in literary brilliance !
"Cool soul vibes waft across
the villa’s hillside pool.
"
Peter

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 1, 2005

Sweet one sweet Kate and soooo romantic a setting lulls my mind and body into wanting to be there even if it is just as a voyeur of the evenings goings on.
Hugs,
Pops

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on August 1, 2005

curious injection of technology into a relationship
i wonder ,,,

evocative annd thought provoking

good write.

john+

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 1, 2005

Awesome images!

"moving pictures,
seen, touched, lived
and loved."

It doesn't get any better than this.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 1, 2005

Oh yes, in the shallows, with the tide coming in and out in and out, two lovers embracing, moving to the rythmn of the sea. Fun fun fun...

Awaiting for the mad man moon to appear, as the sky darkens...

But look out for them crabs going towards the artificial light, instead of the moonlight, they may get a nibble or bite too.