In Tandem (Joseph's Tres Linhas) (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 23, 2006

Poppin' wheelies and flyin' chicks! Kate, you have the right idea, why pedal your legs off just to give your arse a ride! Fly those winged spokes!

Sage

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 23, 2006

Clever, clever you! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on May 23, 2006

Cute, great idea for the lovely summer days,
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 23, 2006

Coo, Coo! lol I like it.

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on May 23, 2006

Enjoyable write
thanks for sharing

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2006

Cos you look sweet on a bicycle made for two, i'm half crazy, la la la la la... Red Bull Burnside...

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on May 22, 2006

Can't say I do know the song, but coming as it does from this particular pen, that one "coo" is worth a dozen sonatas:-)
Aberjhani

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 22, 2006

wheels to nest one's thoughts in ... cute one, Kate ;)

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on May 22, 2006

I'm riffing along to it now...dandruff everywhere. Lovely little ditty Kate, you'll have to get a pic of the happy family when they've hatched.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on May 22, 2006

What a sweet treasure Kate!
Both the poem and the nest
This was fate.....that you left it there unused for so long. Long enough for a bird to start a nest for her babies.....you became part of the circle or life, as well all are.......but in a very special way...you were chosen!!!
pax A

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 22, 2006

C'est très bien exprimé, Madame! Merci. Love and peace from your friend in B.C., Canada,

Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 22, 2006

Well ms bardess this is the cat's meow )or would have been had they found the nest!;-) Gotta love it! Insure that brain;-)...
eT

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 22, 2006

Excellent write, Kate; very well done! Challenge well met!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on May 22, 2006

Wheels give me wings and I coo !!

"On our bicycle made for two..."
Hey! I dig it. This has brought back the song I woud hear my dear mom sing when I was a kid.
Gotta love this one!
I so!!!
Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 22, 2006

Awwwwwww kwack'o duck.......no luck........I think I need that bike!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on May 22, 2006

Kate
A superb and evocative three liner Kate
Reminded me of one of my Mum's favorite songs " Daisy "..
They say when a bird nests in your property it is a messenger
from heaven...:)
Love and Blessings
Peter

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2006

Dear Kate,

I find this poem to be an absolute delight! It reminds me of the fact that the simple things in life are often the best.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2006

Is that the new fashion, carrying around nature's own basket? Gotta love it.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 22, 2006

Too funny but also too good, love the picture and I guess you don't need a bicycle basket now. lol
Fee

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on May 22, 2006

Thanks for the picture, tooooooo -
Your verse says it well, but it's a shame that
you can't ride until the hatching and flying away.
- Bill