As Jude says below, Simply breath-taking poetry. I have read this twice and I am speechless. (That takes a lot!)lol
I love how you ended this poem, it captures the essence of it's core.
You touched a piece of my soul with this one, Kate my friend, and I am again, filled with awe of your writing talent.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
STILL LIFE...ONE HAS TO ADMIT THAT EVEN LIFE THAT IS 'STILL'... IS 'STILL' LIFE. SO, OUR ABSENCE FROM THE PICTURE DOES NOT CHANGE THAT AND THIS IS A WONDERFUL DELVING INTO THE BEAUTY OF 'STILL LIFE'. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
I felt my own lungs fill adn waited to exhale upon reaching your last line. In quiet, damp solitude you honor a spirit with your heart.
Very beautiful.
"For all our ground-breaking advances, the tragedy of absence has never been eradicated or transformed;" And it will never be. The last six lines of this poem, cause my heart to ache. You are as amazing and fresh as ever.
And I agree with the others in what each say. But this poem also made me think of my space and weight in the world. Is it for naught or does it have a real purpose? Am I important, or just an another ant in the colony? When a poem makes me think like this Kate it is a good thing. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister, Barbie.
you are quite animated in this poem, your presence is breath-taking as well enduring ... your perception of stillness is in motion ... the imagery and ambiance powerfully captures a continuing moment ...
Great beginning and energy in those first nine lines! Then your poem goes deeper and deeper, it's like a journey to another dimension. Your question "So which of us is here?" is what seems to call the reader back to the present time. But what exactly is presence? Your last three lines make use of words and actions that are linked to this concept: stillness, breathing, living, thinking... What kind of mirror can show real presence, I wonder. Actually, I think I have an answer: poetry!?
Through ghostly eyes I see the absence and it is beautiful. Patrick
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2009
the s.light introspection of yearning for something......greater.....better....more real.....surreality.. .. and Dylan's abode??? im just exploding with jealousy :}
the way this unveils and illuminates a thoughtfulness, a spectre of vision and revision. .. . pounctuated by all those blurry lines of images past and present. ..
such an intimate knowing and scape.
visited by ghosts of poets past.....
whispers of realms un.known and barely airily t/here.
Kate, you have opened a portal and permited us to view still life's nuances -- is it or is it not the abject gray that surrounds the very aura of being -- or has illusion again won the battle for reality? -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Poets are the only ones that know where the door is and how to slam it shut to get alone with their inner feelings.
Poets are also the ones that can look into a mirror with a hole in the middle and see the reflection of what to come.
Captivating write from the introduction to the closing sweet Kate. It is amazing how we as writers tend to need a "special" place where we can sulk and lick our wounds when our muses refuse to give up the seed of our dreams in words. You grabbed not only the descriptive of the scene but you also managed to correl and show us a little of the heart and soul that resides there...
hugs
Pops
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2009
"Each is convinced of its weight / in the world – except your shadow / as it stands, hands on hips, / exhaling sighs," Outstanding visual here. Beautiful
When you write a poem from a photograph, you don't miss much do you? I have read you fro quite some time now and I have found that you are meticulous and demanding of yourself in the poetical world. Which is exactly why so many people love to come here and sample your words, I being among your many fans.
You are breathing alright Kate by reading those words you have written, there is much life in you. A great write dear Kate.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2009
"welcome relief from weathered
assault, yet still the wind rafts
ghostly curtains as if to rid
the walls of dreams."
If I may borrow a word from you and our sweet Andy Turner: "Blimey!" This is wonderful writing. I love it all - the concept, the inspiration, the philosophy, the words. And, you're the only other human I've ever known to use the word "epiphanic" other than me. In admiration ~
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
the tragedy of absence has never
been eradicated or transformed;
These verses and the whole poem gave me pause for reflection as your poems always do, Kate. Love and best wishes,
Regis
I love how you ended this poem, it captures the essence of it's core.
You touched a piece of my soul with this one, Kate my friend, and I am again, filled with awe of your writing talent.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
"epiphanic instant"... I share the admiration of your many readers.
-gene.
Very beautiful.
Blessings and love,
Susan
"For all our ground-breaking advances,
the tragedy of absence has never
been eradicated or transformed;"
to me, this speaks of death, but the memories - thank God that we have them and they give life.
God bless you. Kathy
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister, Barbie.
welcome relief from weathered
assault, yet still the wind rafts
ghostly curtains as if to rid
the walls of dreams.
Emotionally provocative work, Kate. :-)
Sheila
covered a lot of ground in this exquisit write, kate.
it is always such a pleasure to read your work.
be well,
carolyn
Axilea
the way this unveils and illuminates a thoughtfulness, a spectre of vision and revision. .. . pounctuated by all those blurry lines of images past and present. ..
such an intimate knowing and scape.
visited by ghosts of poets past.....
whispers of realms un.known and barely airily t/here.
so soft.
so inspired.
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ness
and I am still breathing."
You may be, but the depth of your poetry leaves me breathless.
~W~
Poets are also the ones that can look into a mirror with a hole in the middle and see the reflection of what to come.
Georg
hugs
Pops
When you write a poem from a photograph, you don't miss much do you? I have read you fro quite some time now and I have found that you are meticulous and demanding of yourself in the poetical world. Which is exactly why so many people love to come here and sample your words, I being among your many fans.
Undone by the power, the emotion in these painted lines of still life that move the soul - gorgeous.
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
This is delve and search for truth and feeling that are dear to you
and very personal; the setting is highly charged and atmospheric. Yes!
John
Newfie Hugs, Rose
assault, yet still the wind rafts
ghostly curtains as if to rid
the walls of dreams."
If I may borrow a word from you and our sweet Andy Turner: "Blimey!" This is wonderful writing. I love it all - the concept, the inspiration, the philosophy, the words. And, you're the only other human I've ever known to use the word "epiphanic" other than me. In admiration ~
(((HUGS))) and much love from America, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D