MY Little Cardinals (poem) by John T Banasiewicz Jr on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 4, 2005

enjoyed the read

Reviewed by Roxanne Smolen

Reviewed on May 18, 2004

This one brings a tear and a smile. Well penned. :)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

A keeper this one is and so well written...
They grow up too soon but memories are what makes life....

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

Tommy, you tug the heartstrings.. with all that's going on in the world, you're a gentle, wonderful reminder that life DOES surmount it all and when a little 'cardinal' bats and parents cheer, it's great to be alive! You've made my day! Thanks.. katy xox.

Reviewed by Ann Piatt

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

This made me think of my daughter...watching her at karate...but more particularly, playing soccer. What a sight to behold...these little ones...so innocent. It is a thing of beauty to see. Yet a reminder that the years are flying by and she is old enough to be involved in team sports...and i'm not so sure that i am okay with that (makes me feel old age creeping upon me! lol)

This was a really enjoyable read!

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

I loved this! My husband coached for years, then my oldest son coached, too. All four of my kids played for several years. But the best, my favorite with each, was the time at T-ball. Those sweet little faces are priceless!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

What a lovely narrative piece, and one I did enjoy!

~Nikki~

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 16, 2004

Basball is a very good game. A lot of life's lesson's can and are, learned on a diamond. Good, heartfelt poetry.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on May 15, 2004

so touching...I like your mind! Well done!

vesna :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 15, 2004

I can certainly relate to this, John. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 15, 2004

(((john)))

awwwwwwwwwww, i love this--beautiful write!

((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on May 15, 2004

I love this! It's a really cute story-poem!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on May 15, 2004

Wonderful write!!!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 15, 2004

tommy, this is absulutely precious! what a heartwarming write! thanks for sharing!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

although i am not a fan of school sports, i don't mind little league!

Reviewed by Rose L

Reviewed on May 15, 2004

I love seeing all these wonderful reviews - it warms my heart! They see what I see - what a gifted writer you are becoming. Not only is your grandson lucky, but I am deeply honored to be able to call you friend.

Nothing is sweeter than the delight of an afternoon t-ball game with little ones - and how well you captured the excitement that comes along with it. Ever the parent, even your reviewers will long to run aside the little people to help them get to base.

Beautiful snapshot of Americana Tommy.

~Rose~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 14, 2004

This one touched the heart Tommy.....gee I was running for a moment with that little one!!

Congratz Grandpa....on the victory run!!!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2004

Yes John, this was very touching, and I could hear the crack of the bat as one little lad begin his long journey by running toward first base for the first time. What you do as a volunteer is so valuable to our nation; for you help form the character of young people; who many times at home have to live miserable lives. Sometimes a few people give from their hearts in time and efforts and are rewarded in their efforts by at least one person who grew up with character; who would have fallen by the wayside without their help. You do remarkable work. And helieve me, I shed a thankful tear for people such as yourself. Thank you, Bill Murray

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 14, 2004

Wonderful write, John. Go Cardinals!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 14, 2004

This was so lovely! I remember going to my brother's games, excellent memories!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2004

Hi John..My three boys played little league and it
was wonderful watching them...especially when they
won....but they had good attitudes when they lost..
this was a journey into my memory....loved it..floria

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 14, 2004

Thanks for the memories both my sons played little league, and I practice pitched to them;-)Wonderful write!

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on May 14, 2004

John, this touched my heart... I could just see the little players in the field and the crack of the bat as the crowds cheer.
Hope your grandson hits a homer!:):)

~Linda

They’re no “Mighty Casey” as they come up to bat