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I Love You
by Peter Paton → (All Poetry by Peter Paton)
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" True Love Is An Instinctive Knowing And Caring "

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When I fell in love with you

My whole life changed dramatically

Never to be the same again

I was no longer the object of my world

You became the desire and focus of everything

Wanting to share all with you

Every single precious moment

Attracted to your smile and eyes

Smitten by all of your ways

Driven crazy by your kiss and caress

I felt alive and loved for the first time ever

My dreams became a hologram for you

In restless midnight moments

I yearned for your presence and touch

Nothing mattered anymore except us

We became the twin track of entwined hearts

The dual force of one committed mind

Exhilarating moments from now on

Loneliness and sadness became bygotten words

As mystery and mystique bonded us

Blessed and kissed by angels high above

We surrendered our souls with total ease

To merge together in divine stance

And today I stand tall because of you

God bless you for this gift of all

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006

 
   

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 Reviews of "I Love You"
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on January 27, 2006
"We became the twin track of entwined hearts" is THE line most poets of true love strive for. Types of love are all different. Love is issued, not selected. Love is easily damaged in fights. Love bleeds. Loves breaks. "We became the twin track of entwined hearts"
is the model for true love, Peter. For you to have written these words means you have truly met the ultimate love.

Sage

Reviewed on January 27, 2006
Crisp, clean and devoted romance as romance should be.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 26, 2006
a wonderful celebration of love's true embrace ...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2006
Such a show of love, love that is real and was meant to be from times start. Simply divine...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 26, 2006
I am totally rocked by so many of these subtle yet very strong lines here, Peter, which uniquely and piquantly express that most-talked of subject which becomes fresh in your eyes/mind/words. Adore "My dreams became a hologram for you In restless midnight moments": glorious! Love the header quote, too. Bless YOU and your love richly. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 26, 2006
You are truly blessed Peter!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 26, 2006
Ah, true love, spoken by a sage poet who has found his. God Bless both of you forever.

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2006
a wonderful portrait of real love, enjoyed.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 26, 2006
Utterly sublime! You show a superb example of what true love can be!
Congrats on the book,great cover, all the best with it!

eileen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 26, 2006
We became the twin track of entwined hearts
The dual force of one committed mind
Exhilarating moments from now on

And how wonderful for both of you, Peter - and may that exhiliration continue for an eternity.

Love your book cover, too!

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2006
Peter,

" True Love Is An Instinctive Knowing And Caring " I beleive this way also about true love this poem is so beautiful full of passion.
Excellent poem congrats the book.

Love,
Joselyn


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