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You Are My Great Obsession
by Peter Paton → (All Poetry by Peter Paton)
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Apache Prayer

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Now you feel no rain

for each of you will be a shelter to the other

now you will feel no cold

for each of you will be warmth to the other

now you are two bodies

but there is only one life before you

go now to your dwelling place

to enter into the day of your togetherness

and may your days be good and long upon the earth

 

.......................................................................................

 

I hear the beat of the drums echoing in the distance

the gathering gloom envelopes the prairie

wild coyotes are yipping on the bluff

and I am on my way back to you

I have fought many battles

survived skirmishes along the route

walked the trail of the desert fox

certain our paths will cross again

listened to your voice whispering softly in the night

and seen your unforgettable face flickering in my camp fire

nothing else matters but you and I

you are my great obsession

I have faith in you

as you have faith in me

we are different from the rest

because we dare to believe in magic

I move swiftly and silently across the high plains

closing the gap rapidly between you and I

like the red tailed falcon spiralling above

I see everything there is to see

your mirror image imprinted within my heart

the sound of your loving voice resonating in the chambers of my mind

I feel your angel fingers lovingly supporting my soul

awash I am with your tender kisses

sweet nourishment of the inner spirit

knowing my love you are waiting there for me

at the end of the ardous and broken trail

is all that really matters

in the final analysis

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006

 

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 Reviews of "You Are My Great Obsession"
Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on April 24, 2006
This one's a true beauty Peter, nice one my friend.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 24, 2006
we are different from the rest
because we dare to believe in magic

Truly a marvelous ode to love, Peter, and a marvelous picture.

I also love the Apache Prayer since I happen to have married an Apache woman!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on April 23, 2006
Peter, your work spills forth with the beauty of such a tender soul...outstanding

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2006
equisite write

Reviewed on April 23, 2006
Peter,

This is GORGEOUSLY imaged and penned; the heart of the warrior beats within your heart and words; thank you. Keeper, for sure.

((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 23, 2006
Peter...you are a romantic of the finest caliber. This poem makes me swoon for Carey Grant and Grace Kelly. I could picture them so vividly because of the color you gave us in this beautiful vessel of poetry.
Thanks my friend for showing us all another side to you.
Susan

Reviewed on April 23, 2006
Stunning graphics, beautiful write, Peter; very well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 23, 2006
Peter you are such a consummate writer whatever genre you do!
This is another exquisite keeper!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by joseph miller
Reviewed on April 23, 2006
The magic of love is so beautiful. Well done!

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on April 23, 2006
Incredibly beautiful love poem, Peter. Saved...

Lin

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on April 23, 2006
Has Albert Enstein Wrote: Imagination Is More Important Than Knowledge But We Both Already Knew That,i.e. Got To Be Very Careful That Which You Wish(Pray) For-Might Instantly Come True...

Etal: Never Do You Know How Well You Did Something Until You Try To Undo That Which You Did--Exp. Evil El Presidente Bush Iraq War President...

Great Write In Final Analysis...

TRASK

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2006
A prayer is a prayer is a prayer . . . Then there is this.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on April 23, 2006
A wonderful emblem of spiritual faith, Peter. May you and her bear fruit of your joint researches. This poem speaks of antiquities, customs, eloquence, and history. Brandish your tomahawk and have no partitions that separate your fires.

Sage

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 23, 2006
Utterly beautiful Peter!!

Love Tinka


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