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Destiny Calls
by Peter Paton → (All Poetry by Peter Paton)
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"To love another person is to see the face of God."
-Les Miserables

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Last night I had the most mysterious dream

and love was vibrant in the air

mankind had all consented

to put an end to unjust war

I saw a field of wildflowers growing

brilliant and resplendent in color

and dandelions growing alongside

in technicolor row by row

and I felt my heart rippling with such joy and tenderness

as I saw it was your face amongst the flowers

and the spirit of God was hovering above us

while we tended our garden of roses with meticulous care

and we danced together in our marvellous meadow of love

with the universal stars shining ou your crowning glory

as I tied a daisy chain in your lovely hair

with our mesmerized eyes locked in magic embrace

we serenaded our moonlight tune

underneath the milky dew of time

as the lamps twinkled in the canopy of heaven

and the angels and cherubs sang of union and concord

our linked forms dissolved

with incredible and intense alacrity

within the secret veil of us

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
   

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 Reviews of "Destiny Calls"
Reviewed by Joy Marsh
Reviewed on June 7, 2006
Such a peaceful and beautiful poem filled with love and hope.
Joy

Reviewed by Lolly Peele (Reader)
Reviewed on June 7, 2006
Love poems in particular move me these days as I have recently rediscovered this magical emotion. This poem says so much, so beautifully. Thank you for sharing it.
L.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
It's always a great pleasure to read your poems about love. This one is no exception...beautiful, romantic, filled with the purest sentiments.

Gina

Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2006
To look beyond the mystery into the face of LOVE is to stand and behold the never ending face of Creation. How could the angels possibly keep their voices silent? They are the voice of triumph in the grand scheme of all that is eternal unto the Divine Melody of Love. Beautiful writing dear one. :)

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 26, 2006
Peter . . .
This touched me deeply!

The image and the words seem perfectly symbiotic, and I felt the impetus to compose this was deep felt.

I love the line: "mankind had all consented"
The thought was provoking.
What a day that would be!

Richard

Reviewed on May 25, 2006
Peter,

Most beautiful and inspiring; thank you!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
This is beautiful Peter, and the photo grabs the words of this poem and sends it soaring.

Allen

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
Said with, sophistication, and beauty. You truly are a master, Peter.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
you are a poet of peace and love, Peter ... your heart is a reservoir of hope and inspiration ... beautifully conceived poem ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
YOu are a treasure! Perfection!

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
beautiful write

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
Peter, you have painted another diamond in the night sky :)
To shine forever with beauty
thanks for sharing this gem
Love and peace
Huda

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
Would that such a beautiful, planet-saving dream should come true, Peter. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
What a fantastic dream
must be meditation before bedtime or something?
I would love to dream as such
maybe if the world drempt that way
there would be peace
love the pic you chose for your poem as well
its a graceful powerful
This is metaphysical, romantic and optimistic
Fantastic
ty for sharing peter
pax
a

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
...i, too, dreamt the dreams of the holy Angels...and saw the face of God. L'chayim, Peter! love ` rhonda

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
"to put an end to unjust war" et tu, Peter. That aside, this was a beautifully done piece of poetry. You pen was touched by the good Muse here.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
This is destiny and a beautiful garden with love...cherubs and all. I hear the music...smell the boutiful aromas and am taken away to your heaven of a garden.
Susan

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
Oh this ones a perfect raidiance of glorious, shimmering and beautiful agape and it's colors in full form, Peter. You have this incredible gift of being able to bring the reader into your painted on canvas imagery with such powerful feeling of the heart. I applaud the very detail of this remarkable dedication..It is painted with breathless beauty of the dedication to the human souls together. And the healing you are doing world wide is such nobel means through your words, offering hope of the human soul...This left me breathless, dear man...Lovely, lovely...

Peace & Love, Dove


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