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Bracelets and Braveries
by Diana J Legun → (All Poetry by Diana J Legun)
Thursday, September 7, 2023    Rated "G" by the Author.
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More song lyric than poetry, but then those two forms are nearly or clearly synonymous. I have the little melody that goes with this, and maybe that is the true r part of this post. :)


Poem Artwork

 This painting was done with some kind of story behind it, but I never wrote the story, so I wrote these lyrics instead.


Last of the ladies 

With bracelets and braveries

Last of the many men 

Who go down too.

 

Talk is much better heard

Without all too many words

Just the good ones

The best ones

The honest ones in you. 

 

How do we fix this mess,

Deep painful brokenness, 

How do we start to start over?

 

With bracelets and braveries

For men, women and babies

All the goodness in a smile

For who looks like a stranger.

 

This fabric so sorely ripped 

Needs mended by fingertips

By 

Peace bracelets and braveries

And you.


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 Reviews of "Bracelets and Braveries"
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 10, 2023
"How do we start to start over?" I imagine this is contingent on an individual's desire to trust beyond what they know and feel. Hope you're well.

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on September 10, 2023
For me the stanza: "With bracelets and braveries

For men, women and babies

All the goodness in a smile

For who looks like a stranger," the "smile... stranger" idea is the healing poultice that is felt by the heart and mind, enabling intellect and emotion to breathe freely again, regardless of how short the period of joy's gesture may be. To be broken is to feel like a stranger to peace and love. You've made that so knowingly apparent. Thank you for bringing such a critical behavior to the forefront of healing... especially those of us that have experienced it.




Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on September 9, 2023
Lots of emotions shining through in stark reality of what appears to be betrayal. Well written.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 8, 2023
Your poem opens my thinking process, Diana. To me, your theme is applicable on a personal and global scale. Love, peace, and blessings to you,

Regis. 🙏🌸💫💛🐬

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on September 8, 2023
I like it, Ron, that you put it to this as having unclear meaning; that is a good assessment. It has no theme and defies sensefulness. That’s what I like about the song, the words, the painting. Meaningful and clear took a detour and that’s the idea behind the strangeness of the painting. The lyrics I feel can apply to personal relationship, to societal relationship, political relationships — with that last one, the lines “Talk is much better heard/Without all too many words,” being the ringer. Thank you for your comments, I always like your take on what you read here in AD. ~~ Next time I likely won’t fly over your nest, I’ll stop in for a rest :). ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 8, 2023
Your poetry is usually so meaningful and clear. But this one flew over this word cripple's next.

I believe you might be writing about peace bracelets and war, but otherwise, I can't fathom what you're theme is for this song. I know it's not nonsense, but for me it makes no sense.

Ron

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on September 8, 2023
wow I so love the painting and the words are exquisite, I'd love
to hear the song sung, maybe you can sing it ?
Love and light, Vie


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