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Freedoms Dance
by Candida L Eittreim → (All Poetry by Candida L Eittreim)
  
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I will dance away from your life...


Laughing over my shoulder at you as I go


Leaving you to banquet on the crumbs


of the pain you served so well


Sipping the dregs of my tears


from your chalice of discontent


 


 


I will shed the bruised carcass,


you marked so well


with your bitter cruel hand


shrugging it off with careless indifference


my body healing in the suns soft warmth


 


my mouth...scorched..


by your acid tongue


That so savoured the taste of my pain...


smiles....


 


 



intoxicated at the sight of surprise


etched onto your admantine face


relishing the stiletto wound of shock


piercing your acrid flesh


 


dancing,dancing...


head flung back in joy


free of your barren sterile love


your rapacious soul..


 


I will feast at the table of freedom


Drink deeply  from the goblet of life


smash the mirror of your distortions


 under my dancing feet


 


shorn of you forever


i dance loves dance


laughing......


cherishing the dessert of your despair


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 Reviews of "Freedoms Dance"
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Powerful write!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Awesome work, expression...just A W E S O M E!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Whoa! This is as strong as steel and has the bite of a rabid dog. I love it! Just my cop of tea. Brava!

Love, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Well done, strong and emotive.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
Fantastic write!!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on October 21, 2003
Excellent write! ~Z~

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on October 21, 2003
I can't think of any flippant remark to make about this one. well written and full of feeling. You have a Spanish background but a Celtic soul.
Ian

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on October 21, 2003
Wonderful, you talented writer!!


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