AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  William Potter, iLeanne Bright Cloudman, iJill Eisnaugle, iRobert Liu, iEdward Patterson, iRachel Glasgow, iLinda Frank, iBob Brink, iRobert Wood, iMaryAngela Nangini PhD, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Candida L Eittreim

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Blog
· 166 Titles
· 640 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Mar, 2001

Candida L Eittreim, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



The Visitor
by Candida L Eittreim → (All Poetry by Candida L Eittreim)
  
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook


Poem Artwork



The Visitor


 


Sitting by the window.. reading...


soaking up the warmth from a pale sun...


a visitor comes calling.


 


Sneaking through the window


Nosily riffling the pages of my open book


It feels my face...


probing it with icy skeletal fingers


nubbins of flesh raised against its chill caress


 


Its murmuring voice


whispers a song of death


as it races restlessly through my room


leaving scattered petals and ice rimed footprints


in every nook and cranny.


 


Against shuttered windows and barred doors


It howls its rage..


shrieking.. as it tears through the limbs


of the groaning creaking trees.


 


Furious frozen fists batter at the doors


Thwarted...


screaming its wintry discontent to the stygian skies


the anguished cries of the damned


pleading for release


shatter winters peace


 


Once spent..


it fades to an ominous rumble


a fading promise


written on the wind...



I'll be seeing you...


again


 



Copyright October 26, 2003


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "The Visitor"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 2, 2003
Haunting and breathtaking in imagery and evocation of feelings.

Reviewed on November 1, 2003
Beautifully chilling, I loved this!

Reindeer

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on November 1, 2003
brrrr...this is chilling more ways than one...and the layers of meaning and images are top notch...all in all Candida, this is the stuff of dreams...bad dreams...extremely well done!

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
What can I say that the others have not said.
Great
Ian

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on October 27, 2003
This haunts you to the very core, excellent write! ~Z~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2003
Love the "Feeling" and imagery of this poem. Great write!

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2003

WOW!

Fantastic imagery!

I just so relate to such visceral power, and certaily to poets who have the guts to use it to full advantage!

This image:

Nosily riffling the pages of my open book



It feels my face...


really tore into me!


CONGRATULATIONS on a MASTERPIECE!


Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA


Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
really excelent imagery...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
This was mesmerizing, a fantastic horror write. Gave me the shivers, so stealthy and subtle. Excellent work!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
A very chilling write...very well done.
Allen


New Poetry by Candida L Eittreim
Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  Catching Happiness...
  2.  Finding Trust Again
  3.  Nightsky
  4.  Reality of Another Kind
  5.  Life's Enormous Green Chest
  6.  Spindrift
  7.  Kindness
  8.  Luxury of Solitude
  9.  Our Restless Minds
  10.  Roadkill Memoriam
  11.  In The Still of The Night
  12.  Sediment Within the Soul
  13.  Dream Just a Dream
  14.  Feeling Lonely
  15.  Hunting for Truth
  16.  In Praise of Anonymity
  17.  Whisper Pens
  18.  Shaved Reflections
  19.  I Have Spent My Entire Life
  20.  Mythical Dragons
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Before Darkness Falls by J. Allen Wilson

BEFORE DARKNESS FALLS Retails for 14.95 / but you can have it now for only 11.95 This is a book of poetry and prose that deals with real life issues that all of mankind comes to face. Some of the poems deal with the tenderness of love, while others s  
Member BookAds

Down the Rabbit Hole by Regis Auffray

This is my latest limerick collection featuring over 1000 limericks that are sure to delight readers of all ages.  
Member BookAds

A Cut Above ( Is no Longer available) by Michael Jones

this book is dedicated to God, my familiy, and all poets and people who become instruments of change throuh hope, peace, and love.  
Member BookAds