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Loves Lace
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Love is a fairy thing


fragile..



woven together with soft whispers



a sweet caress


a lovers tender kiss


 


 


Loves lace is complex



a weaving of tears and laughter


sorrow and joy


held lightly together


with thin strands of trust and hope


 


Loves lace is intricate


strong enough to hold children, friends and life


in its delicate grasp...


a filigree of joy


 


Loves lace is forgiving...


it gives without breaking


Healing easily


when two hearts are willing


to mend the tears anger has wrought


 


Hold it tenderly..



Keep it always



wrapped gently round those you cherish...


a fragile gift..


this lace of love


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 Reviews of "Loves Lace"
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on November 14, 2003
very good

Reviewed by Michael Emery (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2003
...I'm blushing Eileen...

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on November 11, 2003
Aha! Richard goes after the aberrant apostrophe. He's like the Aussie croc hunter Steve Irwin. "There's one, crikey, he's a big fella. Quick, throw a tarp on him."
But after that surreal excursion, yes, I loved the delicate weaving of images in this poem.

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2003


Very fine indeed, Eileen.

Only one small point.

In some of your verses, you use "Loves" as a possessive. In these instances, it should be spelled:

"Love's"

Thanks


Richard Vallance



Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
Soft truthful poetry, excellent piece Candida! ~Z~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
Beautiful loving write!


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