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Ocean Song for My Mermaid Love
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Just dreaming...


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Ocean Song For My Mermaid Love

We lay naked ‘neath the spotlights

of a midnight sky’s million stars

I feel your desire as a gift found

Squeezed in between Venus and Mars

The churning froth of the breakers

warm wet sand on hot bare skin

Seasoned with the taste of brine

in a place we’ve never been

The beach fire just smoulders on

shades of amber, orange and gold

The soothing music of the ocean

where our love first took hold

The gentle rhythm of our lovemaking

Match the aqua waves ebb and flow

My sleek, seductive mermaid Queen

I’m your King Neptune don’t you know

Two as one we slide into ecstasy’s depths

on a floating bed of soft seaweed

We make fluid love with body and mind

to fulfill our heart’s unspoken need

Then one last kiss my mermaid dearest

I will dream my mermaid you are near

Perhaps when we awake to the morning

we’ll have forever more to share…


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 Reviews of "Ocean Song for My Mermaid Love"
Reviewed on August 26, 2009
very very beautiful Fee....seductive emotions within a beautifully envisioned setting
Peace & Blessings
Vickie

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on August 26, 2009
A sensually haunting fairy tale. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 25, 2009
beautiful and sensuous!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Delicious...love the line "squeezed between Venus and Mars"...you are King Neptune indeed.

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Mermaids forever hear the call of the ones they love, and I liked how you added King Neptune in this, it really fits well-I also love the imagery of the beach and ocean at night, it always seems so magical then, but being a moon child and not a sun child, I would say that, lol :) Loved this.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
And some people don't believe in mermaids. Very nice indeed.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
I love the warmth painted into this scene you so vividly capture for us here, Felix... the fire is so real and that "warm, wet sand on hot, bare skin". I always tend to get a bit goosey when I think of mermaids... would like to be one but am far too afraid of all that cold, deep, dark water! :)) I very much like the sound of basking like a seal on the beach, though. Fabulous magic realism here, where lines of myth and magic merge: I'm sure I can even detect silver scales on your hands, chest and in your beard! Lovely! :)) xx

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
It is always magic when romance and the sea are together...enchanting Fee

Carole~

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Fee, You have written a very delightful poem about my two most favorite subjects the ocean and mermaids...What a poem!!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Ah..you have created wonderful imagery with this poem, Felix. Beautiful flow to your words...captivated my imagination! Lovely write.

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
an oceanic romance whose depths will endure ... lovely poem, Felix ...

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Let the breakers roll on in.......
:) Cherrypie

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
wow, from deep within you never stop amazing us. beautifully said. ladyJ

Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Wonderful write, Fee, and glad you made it through the Big Blow! :) (Bill.) Well done; bravo! Love the piccy!

((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Quite captivating, King Neptune. May you and your Mermaid Queen find eternal bliss.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
As an old sailor I know out there are mermaids, never see one though, nor even had a little campfire by the shore with one, like you, so, what's your secret?

Georg


Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
ah, To dream this magical dream..a gift from the heavens above to the depth of the oceans below, a song echoing in the night...'Exquisite' Fee :)
Chrissie

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Dear Cuz there you go, You have all of us putting the sea, the sky and the stars up above all together which turns into LOVE. Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
There's something about romance combined with the ocean...this is a piece of heaven, Fee.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
VERY BEAUTIFUL, VERY ROMANTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva


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