Never Give Up (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Never Give Up
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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*Never Give Up A Dream* *The old man walked along the beach* *Leans on walking stick of cheery wood* *Takes the same stroll here everyday* *Wears an old parka, pulled up hood* *Snowflakes soon be in the air again* *Shivers remembering last year’s cold* *Sits on the old piece of driftwood log* *Smiles, thinking how’d I get this old* *Same beach he took her so long ago* *This place he first kissed her lips* *Where they once stroll hand in hand* *Wave out to sea at the passing ships* *Love they said would outlast all time* *They’d wait forever until that day* *Sharing wind, sea and kisses sweet* *Neither would have it any other way* *Time couldn’t steal their faith in love* *Now down the beach he saw her clear* *His old heart beat a little bit faster* *Seeing her wave at him, wind in hair* *Once more they strolled hand in hand* *Pausing now and then to share a kiss* *Time was now life’s sweet reward* *For they were granted their fondest wish*

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on July 25, 2010

Beautiful, Fee ~ good for the soul.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on July 22, 2010

A sweet, romantic poem, Fee. I love how you set the scene in that first verse, all the way down to his parka. Well done. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Felix, a marvelous and proper love story my friend. One with a happy ending. May peace love and joy stroll the sands of your life. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on July 21, 2010

Such a beautiful work Fee. Love lasts forever and you have shown us that if it is true two people will not be kept apart.
hug
kathy

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on July 19, 2010

Fee, What a wonderful wish that came true! We are never to old to have romance in our lives. He will always have memories of that special beach where it all began. Lovely romantic poem!! Take care my friend. ~Chessly

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Lovely write, Fee!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Great message, great poem.

Reviewed by David Maclellan

A truly great romantic poem Felix, there is something special visiting the place where it all started.
Best regards,
David

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 18, 2010

never too old for romance ... beautiful poem ...

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

This is so beautiful Fee
in the essence too of how it makes people feel
I know for me those people I have known for mhy lifetime
as sacred and special to me..and this embraces that emotion
be it lovers, or friends....it's very special
Sea Shells & Sandy Toes
Vickie

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Wishing memories could be forgotten, better off we'd be...e

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Everyone's dream Fee! :)

Axilea

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

beautiful!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Lovely writing as always sweet Fee..Hugss

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

I agree with Dawn and Christine!!!!You never cease to amaze me with your romantic side...

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Fee, so many people write about young love.......but this is so beautiful.....and so much more special, because it transcends time.