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Oceans and Sand
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~Oceans and Sand ~ Our souls they mesh like the ocean immersing into the sand grains of pebbles formed to one by water in our hands As emotions depths are fathomless passions swirling in tumultuous space loosing ourselves in each other as erotic rhythms match the ocean�s pace As the waves glide upon the shore gently stroking the shapes of sand and as the sensual waves roll over us following our curves with a slow hand Deeply goes the sand into the oceans very core The depth we share together will last longer than the shore See the sands float out mingling with the ocean our souls, they in like combine As parts of the ocean stay with the sand traces of ourselves we leave behind Our souls are like the oceans and sand even as far in the distance as I can see As our souls they have know each other longer through the winding paths of eternity � all rights reserved Carole Mathys March 21, 2005

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on May 13, 2008

The seas and sands will go on an on forever just as our souls will do so too.

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2005

Wow. This is Stunning Beautiful Romantic Peaceful and so Soothing.
Gorgeous!
Thank You Carole
Happy Easter
Tracey

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 25, 2005

A beautiful metaphorical and symbolic poetic offering, Carole. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

WOW, and I guess that says it all.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Sheer beauty, Carole. A masterful creation.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

AN EMERALD JEWEL OF A ROMANTIC PIECE
WELL WRITTEN BY ONE OF THE BEST OF CAUSE
THANKS FOR SHARING CAROLE
"step aside D'Artagnan".....LOL

William .....PEACE & LOVE

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Oh, this is so poetically gorgeous. Your picture is perfect for the words. OCEANS and SANDS soothes the spirit with grace and wisdom.

~ Mari

Reviewed by David Young

Such a ride with your words,gentle and soothing images.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

the tides of this poetic gem reach far onto the shores of beauty ...

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Lovely. Wish I could bring myself to believe in this. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

I think that this is a keeper too. It is a departure from your usual kus but this is incredibly beautiful.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

i like this

Reviewed by Sue Hess

a beautiful poem

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Oh this is a keeper!!

Just love this to pieces!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Carole,

I wish I'd written this beautiful, calming write, too...most magnificent!

The title drew me in and your words transported me to serenity--thank you!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Carole,

The verse, the imagery, the beauty, and the picture all blend into one stunningly gorgeous poem - shear perfection here ... wonderful!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by A PAX

My highest compliment to you Carole

:)
wish i wrote this!
pax A

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Utterly beautiful, Carole! The imagery in this one is outstanding.
It is sensual, leaves one feeling caressed by the waves while
becoming a part of the sea,the surroundings,and all of nature !

etw

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Deeply goes the sand
into the oceans very core
The depth we share together
will last longer than the shore

Quite an eternal bonding, Carole; and quite a poem.