Each free style Haiku is a gem in itself and you have mastered this venue very well in each descriptive write. I. too, enjoy writing Haiku's and you have inspired me, with your writes, to delve beyond the obvious and look at Haiku's in a different light. Thank you.
As usual, Carole, your words are outstanding, picturesque and wrap around the mind like a soft, warm coverlet. What a joy to drift through your haikus!
*a flight of geese
pulling winter behind them
like a bleak banner*
This is perhaps the bleakest of them all, in their color and enjoyment, but also perhaps the most apropos for the coming weeks. (:D
*autumn trees
stripping out of their leaves
discretely*
As I read this gem, I thought also that the word *slipping* would fit here also. *Stripping* right now is how our trees are shedding their jewels, though. LOL
A Rockwell painting in words. Vivid and beautiful.
blessin's Sis C.
cynth'ya
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2005
You've really beautifully captured every little sight, sound and smell of the most beautiful season of the year that I don't get here I miss Autumn. Thank you for this Gorgeous poem Carole. Gorgeous!
Tracey xoox
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*a flight of geese
pulling winter behind them
like a bleak banner*
This is perhaps the bleakest of them all, in their color and enjoyment, but also perhaps the most apropos for the coming weeks. (:D
*autumn trees
stripping out of their leaves
discretely*
As I read this gem, I thought also that the word *slipping* would fit here also. *Stripping* right now is how our trees are shedding their jewels, though. LOL
Peace. Joyce
blessin's Sis C.
cynth'ya
Tracey xoox
The contents and imagery add beauty to this magnificent composition-
compilation of "Autumn Thoughts (freestyle haiku)".
Thank You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
writes
Great haiku
thanks for sharing
William .....Peace & Love
You have described autumn so well.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
etw
"dried brown leaves
chase each other around
empty school yards"
Love Tinka