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Under Neon Stars
by Carole Mathys → (All Poetry by Carole Mathys)
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A Collaborative Effort from the pens of
Carole Mathys and Jon Michael Willey


Poem Artwork

~ Under Neon Stars ~

 

As the sun sets
and darkness slides upward
cloaking the stark realities of the city
neon lights twitch and lay down their glow
streaking across dirty back streets
colors are smeared across puddles
between scattered pieces of alley trash
bluesy music escapes through cracks
of aging sooty brick structures
 lonely hearts put on their evening wear
attire for roaming the streets
and smoke filled dimly lit bars
looking for love, another chance at romance
in a back corner under neon stars
they resemble tissue paper
between the pages of emotional flares
and complicated stages
where no more is required
behind closed doors
but the occasional fling
desire’s fires and cheap passions soar
turning out the lights
‘til dawn begins a new day
but daylight will bring reality
of tawdry passions chased in midnight’s way
where blood boils hot and 
visions blur with false truths
and a warm partner is found
quivering lips, willing and made for sin
invite a flight into the grip of oblivion
for a few delusional hours
they hide under the blanket of darkness
until misconception at last soars
within the arms of a stranger
a night of unrealistic hope 
a moment of escaping the solitude
where neon illusions
are as flimsy as  tissue paper dreams

 

Photo of Joan Bennett
in "Scarlet Street" 1945

 


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 Reviews of "Under Neon Stars"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 3, 2009
This is beautifully written
an outstanding collaboration
Love & peace to you both

William

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on April 21, 2009
you are a master, carole. nothing like the good old grip of oblivion to tarnish one's wayward desires come the light of day...
be well,
carolyn

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Seamless, and I love the flow... just like those sulty silk stockings I am imagining that go with this! The textures you write with here are lovely - full-bloodied and senuous; fragile and concerned. An honest account, crafted with great care and sensitivity, highlighting both the seamy-side of life and the sad. And how often the two are inextricably linked. Thoughtful work, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2009
By jove..you two are marvelous together..superb creation of mind, heart and soul!!


Blessings,

Vesna



Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 12, 2009
A most fine collaborative creation; thank you for sharing this gift, Carole. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on April 11, 2009
This flowed from beginning to end, where the ending was so special. I love the last two lines.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on April 10, 2009
Again, a superb and memorable collaboration. From the neon stars
to the tissue paper dreams, you captured it all--the grit, the loneliness, the hunger, the sad realization that the one-night
stand is all too often "a night of unrealistic hope." This, to me, is a work of art. -gene.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2009
Very well done indeed ..enjoyed....Hugsss

Reviewed by Johanna Fields (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2009
I enjoyed your poem it drew me in and created a picture to read. Hugs Johanna

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 8, 2009
"...looking for love...of tawdry passions chased in midnight's way..."
Like standing under those neon stars, taking that elusive and artificial blink that we self delude ourselves are blinking only for us, because we wish, we want, we hope for that explosive hope that's called love...

Georg


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 8, 2009
Quite captivating, and quite good.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 7, 2009
How well and delicately you describe a scene that plays over and over from lover to lover. Excellence beyond thoughts and a portrait of life worthy of preserving...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 7, 2009
exceptional imagery ... a delightful merging of thought and sensation ...

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 7, 2009
Carole and Jon,
Teeming with strong visuals and a current of sadness...the nightly rituals of hope, casual partnering, the search for love, the settling for gratification...and the sheer bleakness of it all. Congratulations! You've excelled once again.
John

Reviewed on April 7, 2009
Enjoyed this great pen and the way you delivered it.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 7, 2009
Vivid images from masterful minds as both of you merge as one to gift us with such magnificent poetry! Bless you both!Splendid work!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on April 7, 2009
Nice collab, Carole and Jon; enjoyed~ Brava~ Bravo~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on April 7, 2009
HOT nights, in the city, effectively penned, Carole and Jon. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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