~ Autumn Serenade ~
the fall sun was
still shrugging off sleep
as the last days of summer
had been pushed off stage
while long shadows
stretched toward winter
the ground was littered with
spent leaves of red and yellow
chestnuts in spiky coats
sat proudly on fingertips
of cold branches
a cool breeze brought with it
clusters of forgotten items
gum wrappers, dried leaves
brown and green duck’s feathers
they danced along
the reaches of the street
resting then twirling
in step with each gust
a final shimmer
of autumn sun reached through
a French window
hovering winsomely
landing, exhausted
in a series of pale squares
© Carole Mathys
October 2009
In Autumn Serenade you created the perfect poem about
the fall season, and the picture you inserted fits in
just perfectly.
Well done,
Stephen Pollard
Myrna
Anna
lovely capture,
carolyn
Georg
hugs
fee
Well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Regis
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Mark
This is inspired writing, the composition, choice of language and detail all right, so right; poignant and beautiful.
John