Exo-Genesis (poem) by Paul Williams on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Rose L

Reviewed on April 14, 2006

Having recently attended a Pow Wow in Central Florida, I can tell you that this particular piece resides in the heart of many people.

I particularly enjoy that your style of writing commands the reader toward self-reflection and responsibility.

Great write and a pleasure to become acquainted with such a talented writer!

Peace,

~Rose~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 14, 2006

Je veux me cacher, Paul. Thank you, though.

Love and peace,

Regis (Reg)

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on April 12, 2006

Very good indeed.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Fascinating~! And all without wasting a word~~!
B r a v o !!! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Exo-Genesis is an ecological link which unites us with the planet, the psychedelic experience longing to get back to paleolithic states. New shamanism movements integrate a world-view of traditional shamanism and link to the current environmental problems, goes like this,

The Airs you have poisoned
By your cars, your smoke,
your factories,
And again the Spiral's turning
Poison Air and poison Water
Trees start dying in the forest
Poison Air, poison your
children
Poison your
species.

I can feel the drumbeat and leopard-spirit stored in the forest of trees, Paul.

Sage

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on April 11, 2006

Dear Paul,

Another of your exceptional writes, filled with strange and obscure visions, one can almost see the tribal shape shifter dancing and stomping around a fire, and hear the sound of resonating drums... superb imagery Paul.

Warmest hugs and love my dear friend.
do take care
Elga

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 10, 2006

"corrupting the language of innocents" is an interesting concept. Think the malevolent mendacious eyes is/are so fitting as I always think the spirit of Babel is the spirit of division. Not only does this divisiveness split our tongues, but it also stops our ears. Like this exegesis on exo-genesis, Paul. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

Paul,

I am so glad I stepped through the door to a fascinating new world, not for the faint of heart. Excellent poetry!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

Paul
You give us a peek into a fascinating and hallucinating scenario...
Not for the faint hearted...:)
Love the graphic !
Peter

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

A true example of poetic excellence abounds in "Exo-Genesis", and flows through its imgery of symbolical and real depicting of a surreal hypnotic transe of intersouls communication.

I have enjoyed the reading of "Exo-Genesis".

I salute You, Poet!

Long healthy creative life.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

Paul this is a bolt of lightning! Exceptional write, that provokes much thought! Hope there are more parts;-)...

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

Exo: outside, external to Genesis. Those Shamans aren't just manifesting schizophrenia, they are down right high as a kite on pot or psilocybin. Which can open the door to senses you only thought were awake.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

Most chilling feel to this one Chuckie!!

But superb poetry!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

. . . and we continue to babble and shriek and . . .

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

Both chilling and fascinating, Paul!