Disturbing Ovid
The dawn arrived in her soft saffron car,
reading the paper over breakfast
a silence fell to break the air’s
insistence on carrying clutter from afar.
Done with the drivel of the world,
the silence encouraged thought
to morph; so, to a universe where love
is cruel, men are destroyed by Gods
and treachery paid for in blood…
‘hang on? That’s…Oh! never mind…’
Sulphur smeared torches lit the way,
following heroic deeds and tragic loss of love,
the bathing of wounded hearts in tears.
The Serpents teeth had been sown
and armies of the dead fought and died again.
Lydian sailors cast into the spray
by the boy Bacchus, a man at play.
Fools challenging the Gods
turned into owls, bats and frogs
and love so cruel…Echo and Narcissus,
poor Pyramus, poor Thisbe.
And Atlas made to carry
the weight of the world upon mountainous shoulders
Medusa’s nemesis upon winged Pegasus
and the slaying of the Gorgon
all these tales and more did fill my morning
but the fresh beauty of silence
withered into the air…
destroyed by the incessant buzzing
of a Bluebottle lost in curtains of poor taste
from which it had now escaped.
Child of the serpent race, child of Mars
I know your tricks, you seek to destroy
this process of transcendence.
I’m the eye in this universe
Your guise is no disguise, your ploy
fails, upon the display cabinet
filled with decorative tat,
Lydian dolphins, marble elephants,
fresh garlands, tresses dripping with myrrh,
crystal glasses and all that.
I slake my thirst for vengeance
with a weapon that proffered hope
a rolled up copy of The Guardian’s
G2 supplement, I’d gone over the
edge and could no longer cope.
Swat!
my winged tormentor
fast though it was
fell lifeless into the bin…and silence returned
I have no use for the company of Nymphs.
Paul Williams©2006
Let me know if and when you get this one and the others published...I am anxious to hold the book in my hands. :) Helen
Regis
A unique composition with outstanding simbological imagery...
"Disturbing Ovid" flows, and its light glows enchanting the minds and nourishing souls.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Enjoyed.
Aberjhani
The mind captures so much, continually and perpetually for the extent of our lives, and it seems that only what is most annoying, or perverse, or bent on destroying the inerancy of ageless Truth, or most colorful, or loud, gets the nod and the recallable memory.
It takes much discipline to "see" beyond the flesh illusion" and the paint that modern life suggests we adorn ourselves with to be noticed.
One might wonder if the bluebottle, and its freakoid colors, is a type and shadow of a spiritual force bent on blinding us temporarily to the more subtle nuances around us.
Good write Paul!
Richard
Sage
Hey you promised not to post this pic with me Kate ant those other girls you stud.....lol!!
Love Tinka
Longinus, my girl say's that. Is he a friend of Bigus Dickus? Hail Brian...
Clever very clever using such mythological creatures in such an ekphrasic way....
Take care,
Sherry
I believe you delivered a blow against the Lord of Flies here...;)
And I always thought the bluebottles were the cops...;)
Peter