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Shezray Faisal

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If You Could Feel What I Feel
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If you knew the hurt


If you knew the pain...


If you would feel the incrediblity


Of situations you've put me in,


If you could feel the surprised tears


Trickling from stunned eyes,


If you could feel the quiet storm


Achingly brewing inside...


If you would know the patient fear


Of loving and keep loving,


How tired a  heart can feel


Braving & trying ...trying & braving


 


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 Reviews of "If You Could Feel What I Feel"
Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
Reviewed on September 20, 2005
What a deep beauty! Your words will be with me for a long time.

Reviewed by Muhammad Ali Panhwar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2005
Whao! What a lovely set of words reflecting the emotions from inside. Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Masood Lohar
Reviewed on July 6, 2005
"Patient fear", "surprised tears"
It is a very powerful write.

Reviewed by Ghuffran Ullah (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
The continous struggle of trying to keep up with the roller coaster of emotions in our daily batles with our surroundings is a part of makes us human.

remember what you said if not today then someday ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
"Of loving and keep loving,
How tired a heart can feel"
I can relate most intensely with these verses and to the whole poem. Thank you for sharing it, Shezray. Love and peace to you. Regis



Reviewed on May 29, 2005
Never give up Shezray- Keep the Faith! This is a really nice poem- HuGs,Sheee

Reviewed on May 28, 2005
wonderful write, shezray! well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, a friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D


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