It's been a month since she died
But I feel deep inside...
She is with me.
She hides from my sight
Until I turn out the light...
She is with me.
I hear her walking the halls
Feel her gaze from the walls...
She is with me.
Hear an ecstatic moan
I know I'm never alone...
She is with me.
Fingers run through my hair
When there's nobody there...
She is with me.
I taste her icy breath
Planting kisses from death...
She is with me.
She whispers in my ear
That I've got nothing to fear...
She is with me.
She won't wait til I'm dead
I put the gun to my head...
I am with her.
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Reviews of "Haunted"
Reviewed by James Sanders
Reviewed on February 20, 2003
I dont like your picture. (The one of you lying on your porch with the blue shirt) You little rainbow warrior!
Reviewed by Brutal Dreamer (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2003
WOW, just read: HAUNTED
Ken, these eerie descriptions and feelings flowed into beautiful wicked prose. How impressive.... icy kiss breath....kisses from death... such imagery that lends itself to.
Beautiful writing my friend.... wicked, but beautiful. The ending was a bang, for sure!
Grab those side-irons, saddle up and join former Civil War sharpshooter Luther Henry for a ride into pure terror, western-style…think ‘Wild Wild West’ meets ‘The X-Files’.
Ken, these eerie descriptions and feelings flowed into beautiful wicked prose. How impressive.... icy kiss breath....kisses from death... such imagery that lends itself to.
Beautiful writing my friend.... wicked, but beautiful. The ending was a bang, for sure!
josie
To Keep Her (Someone) In Your Memories Fine, But, Never Keep Her In Your Heart,i.e. Life
Begins & Ends For a Reason___
Keep Her In Your Heart,As Her (she) Can't Leave This Holy Hell World... The Above Fiction or Not!
TRASK PS: I Await 1st UFO to Land,(Me Leaving This World) You'll See Black Burnt Tire Marks From My Corvette Going Up The Ramp!!
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wow a gun. this was written very well.
and they ending....
Peg