In her review of Storming Gentle Woman, Joyce Bowling wondered if I could analyze her eyes.
I don't know why asking me, I am not an expert just an ordinary poet or trying to be one, but, eyes tell me something, and I tell what they say to me, not like a fortuneteller, just what those eyes said, when I was listening.
But...I can't analyze them...
Dedicated to Ms. Joyce Bowling, may the children always have her in their hearts.
Analyze,
how can one analyze only those eyes
which are part of a much larger picture,
symmetry,
when our world is running in total chaos
is that kind of face one expect having such
sincerity,
that will appease all our fears, and comfort
our darkest hours when we are in utterly
misery,
those eyes tell you to see the woman there
the face, the smile, the peaceful pose, all
openly
for you to approach, feel there is a friend
inside of a friend that offers love, not
charity.
Analyze,
how can anybody do it, those eyes that saw
in so many children the crime of abuse and
injustice,
eyes that need to go to heal in the mountains,
God’s stone cathedrals no full of panaceas, just of
peace;
but the knowledge lies there, behind the light
that calmly burns for the pain of others souls in
captivity,
where no tender hand will stroke a head and
no one will tell them, with a whisper, of their
beauty;
it’s into those mesmerizing eyes you don’t want
to go inside, because you will see what they saw,
cruelty.
Analyze,
how can anyone see the eyes without the face?
with that serene stillness, like a kind of waiting
quality;
a orphan will see in her the mother he never had,
the infirm, a hand coming to alleviate those laying
sick;
friends in distress can count on understanding,
never a judgment in those eyes they will ever
see,
just a friendly face not showing what it endured,
tears will be shed in church, witness by God, in
privacy;
after traveling so many dusty roads sowed with pain,
maybe, I saw her eyes looking out there, for some
clemency.
Such a wonderful write my friend, you've written a beautiful tribute that has brought tears to my eyes! You've described my heart and soul with such expertise! I am flattered indeed...you know Georg I find peace inside my classroom, when many other teachers are complaining about their children being rowdy or they just can't wait to go home, I am the one who many look at as being odd am enjoying my day with my students, sympothizing with those who have a rough life at home, enjoying teaching those that thirst for knowledge, being the mom that many don't have, and enjoying the structure and safety of my little haven...my classroom!
I've had Internet problems at home this week...had I known about your tribute I would've made time at work to log on read it and commented, I've just been grabbing a few minutes here and there...boy am I glad to be back at the den, I've missed everyone! Again, I am flattered and touched! Thank you dear friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
I see a lady, not unlike the character played by ( Ann Bancroft I think) in the movie twister!
Longsuffering, generous, caring, practical, LOVING, a healthy outlook on life, but also I see a line that this lady dosent cross, nor lets anyone else cross if it be for No good.
A deserving soul.
God bless you Joyce,
And TY Georg
Hugs to you both
Ch'erie
Wow Georg, this is just fantastic, a fine tribute to such a passionate, caring lady. You have done Joyce justice in this beautiful and endearing write....
Her eyes do speak volumes. There is a certain 'far away' look in her eyes, but the total picture contradicts it. There is such a serenity to her face and perhaps the eyes reflect that peacefulness - a longing for a better place.
Such beautiful tribute
Joyce eyes tell me that she is a very
Kind and gentle soul and she is a very
Caring and given person
And her eyes are very truthful
I always look into a persons eyes
Because what the eyes reveal it's always right
you can learn a lot about a person by reading their eyes!
Your words captured the eyes of a beautiful soul!
Love Peace and hugssss to you my friend...Morning Star
Georg,
What a beautiful tribute for a beautiful woman.
You are a gem of a man, I believe your eyes need to be written about..hmmm smells like a poem to me.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Eyes are the key to the soul, and you have seen the love and forgiveness shining forth from them, despite all the bitterness she has experienced, you have opened the door just a smidgen and described it beautiful and with feeling in your poem!
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Great job,stay safe and well dear man...Hugssssssssssssssssss
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Some things just ain't meant to be analised i guess... Fine wine tribute....
O, my sweet Georg; that is a beautiful tribute to Joyce Bowling; very moving and heartfelt! She will be touched by this; I sure was! Thanks for sharing; very well done! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
I'd like for you to look in my eyes, see what you see in me. I'm curious as to find out! I love these tributes; keep 'em coming!
Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
You have done a wonderful job with this tribute. One which captures every aspect of a wise, wonderfully passionate, loving and knowing woman.I am sure the children will, in fact, have her in their hearts always.
Best regards,
Chris
This book consists of a 150 pages of Christian poetry about the end of time and the Second coming of Jesus Christ not as a servant but as a King, the King of kings. To bring righteousness and peace to the earth and restore the government of God! Peac
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
I've had Internet problems at home this week...had I known about your tribute I would've made time at work to log on read it and commented, I've just been grabbing a few minutes here and there...boy am I glad to be back at the den, I've missed everyone! Again, I am flattered and touched! Thank you dear friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Longsuffering, generous, caring, practical, LOVING, a healthy outlook on life, but also I see a line that this lady dosent cross, nor lets anyone else cross if it be for No good.
A deserving soul.
God bless you Joyce,
And TY Georg
Hugs to you both
Ch'erie
Love Tinka
Be safe,
Karen
The image that you portray is uplifting.
I agree with Walt - the ayes have it!
Kathy
Joyce eyes tell me that she is a very
Kind and gentle soul and she is a very
Caring and given person
And her eyes are very truthful
I always look into a persons eyes
Because what the eyes reveal it's always right
you can learn a lot about a person by reading their eyes!
Your words captured the eyes of a beautiful soul!
Love Peace and hugssss to you my friend...Morning Star
What a beautiful tribute for a beautiful woman.
You are a gem of a man, I believe your eyes need to be written about..hmmm smells like a poem to me.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
John
The aye's have it with this one Georg.
Walt
sometimes one can't get passed
The beautiful personality of a lovely person
Peace be with you
William
You have seen the person who is Joyce, just by looking into her soul: absolutely beautiful. She will love this, as do I: well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *Storming Gentle Woman*
Fee
Newfie Hugs, Rose
stan
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
I'd like for you to look in my eyes, see what you see in me. I'm curious as to find out! I love these tributes; keep 'em coming!
Best regards,
Chris