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Killing Tin Soldiers
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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Oh my brothers, you, that are on harms reach, you are not small tin soldiers moving on a table depicting a past or future battle, because I hear your mothers crying, and they aren't made of cheap tin.


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THE HYMN OF THE BATTERED REPUBLIC

They have many tables to play in a
weird formed house called Pentagon,
one is dedicated to Gettysburg battle,
other to fighting Napoleon in Waterloo.

There is a full table named Normandy,
besides the one with the name Inchon,
all great perfect planned war battles
no a table with the name of Iraq I saw.

I heard once about the “cannon fodder”
acceptable casualties we were told,
to conquer a little hill not in your maps,
“to confuse the enemy” said the top dogs.

Many tables in the weird building you see,
and if you don’t do something, many more,
because all those Tin Soldiers standing there,
each one represents one American fighting son.

Singing The Hymn of the Battered Republic,
you aren’t sending Tin Soldiers to be shot,
because one day the People will be so angry
that they will convert Pentagon on a parking lot.



 

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Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
The reason we are, where we are now "Over There"
is because the knucklehead politician, in the "HIll"
Like to play Monday morning Commanding geregals
Don't they have a hard job as is, lining their pockets,
getting their hands greased, looking the other way?
Trying to keep the spoils of war??????
Treating and blaming the Commanding Generals like criminals
At Senate hearings, they screw up than they go out on a witch hunt.
I don't know who I hate the most, Lawyers, Carsalesmen or Politicians
They are all molded from the same product "DUNG"
Don't get me startedddddddddd!

Sorry Brother Georg
I had to rant out my anger

William
(One Pissed Musketeer)

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
I think many see this war as a shot in the darkness of terrorism. But, you have to know what you're shooting and what you hope to achieve. Somehow [in my feeble brain] I think that this war was a retaliation and not well thought out. In. Out. The original plan - backfired. Maybe I'm not sufficiently fore-sighted, but I don't see this as helping our soldiers, their families, or our freedom.

Well said, my friend.
Kathy

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
At least with waterloo, and Normandy we had well thought out battle plans. Here we are just glad we booted Blair out, now getting our troops out.
No long term thought went in to this semi war, no thoughts of consequences or undrstanding of a culture that is to scared to think for itself, for if they do...BANG! The govts were naive trying to help a culture who only see life in their autocratic way....
Bush didn't know were Iraq was on the map, or England come to that.
Brav write as the Reps will dispise this from what I've learned about America. Wot the heck, we love Bill C over here and want his MRS in.

Why is it, we saw Blair had naffed up so we booted him out, why can't america do that in a democracy, or is it not a real democracy?

Reviewed on September 25, 2007
God help us to get some guts and stop the slaughter. A powerful write Georg.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
'cannon fodder'. Ugh. All wars, however inevitable, are despicable horrors of intolerance, non-communication, greed, power struggles, etc. Terrestrial woes.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
"because all those Tin Soldiers standing there,
each one represents one American fighting son."

A son, a father, a brother, a husband, a friend ...
NOT tin soldiers but flesh and blood.

People must have the courage to say "NO!" to the War Profiteers!

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
...concrete write...of Pentagon thoughts...with coverted hope for the future.
well done...
John

Reviewed by April Sims
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
VERY POWERFUL write. One day the people will get tired of all the memories that were never able to be born because of the head of the Pentagon. ~ April

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
Georg,
You should be in charge of our future...
I think you should run for Presidente' I would definitely vote for you.
This is one amazing poem, Sir President!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
Oh Georgie ! You are so beautiful and so wise! If only you were America's Leader, maybe we would overcome all the insanity that is draggin us down! LOVE YOU ! SC

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
I heard once about the “cannon fodder”
acceptable casualties we were told,

I've heard too many times about the cannon fodder, and I truly believe that as long as this mentality exists by those in power, wars will continue to rage on, and our valiant soldiers will continue to pay the price for these 'war games.'

Reviewed on September 25, 2007
Georg,

A powerful, powerful write that speaks of sacrifice; of anger; of sadness. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

GOD BLESS THE TROOPS!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
Excellent writing dear man...Enjoyed as always...Hugs

Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
Standing ovation Georg.
When we can get to the point where there are no wars/conflicts, I want to operate the steam roller to put down the asphalt!
My respect and best wishes
Chris

Reviewed on September 25, 2007
Amazing write, Georg; very well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on September 25, 2007

A historic poetic accomplishment... "Killing Tin Soldiers" has depicted
the psycho-part (Intention) of the industrialized war, designed and developed by the FIVE LORDS OF U.N. SECURITY COUNCIL.

In the century of poetic REVELATION this is a glowing page.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
A very touching write Georg, and what was the battle as Felix said best be legitimate for our children to lay down their lives. Thank you.

Neafie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
Well said Georg, sometimes we must stand up and fight but it had better be for a legitimate reason if we are going to ask our sons and daughters to lay down their lifes.

Fee

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
So many battles fought for nothing in the end, such was the plight of our soldiers in North Korea and the 38th parallel and there our soldiers sit to this day.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 25, 2007
A very emotional write Georg, yet the logic is so well described. We are living under very good times at the present and am beginning to wonder if we ever will again.....

Be safe,
Karen


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