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Walking Feet Going Nowhere
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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A few men on Easter came and went from Jerusalem, they said they found nothing, they weren't blind, they were just not looking...


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Hey, shoes! Don’t complain so much
it is me being carried away by them…
and it is a long way before we can see
the dusty walls of my old Jerusalem.

They told me that a new King was there
and that the old king having a problem
accepting another one near his throne
would declare the new one for an infidel.

Coming to the city from the south portal
found that it was empty, like a big fest
had packed the main street with people
circus was in town, was what I guessed.

Following against the returning current
to a place they called the Calvary I went,
I couldn’t believe so much excitation,
from three small thieves barbaric death.

It called my attention the crying women
prostrated below the cross of one of them,
badly beaten yet talking to the above skies
despite of the nails piercing and mayhem.

I kept going, I saw no new King, but soldiers,
wailing women and a dozen of coward men,
as leaving the city with hunger in my belly
thirty silver coins I found under a hanged man.

I know…I know, why to keep going in search
of a chimera of a dream of a King’s descent,
when my feet, indefatigable walking to nowhere,
in the Holy City found nothing…and just went.



  

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 Reviews of "Walking Feet Going Nowhere"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
Very TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Powerful my friend, this is so powerful, is there a magazine that can carry these poewerful words?

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 22, 2008
Most excellent Georg!!

HAPPY EASTER TO YOU!!

Love Tinks

Reviewed on March 22, 2008
Excellent!

Happy Easter to you and yours! God bless you mightily!

(((HUGS))) and much love from America, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on March 22, 2008
Stunning, Georg, what more can I say? WOW!!!!! Powerfully penned - Happy Easter to you.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on March 22, 2008

I have enjoyed the reading of "Walking Feet Going Nowhere".

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
and that is how many viewed it, and still do.
using the first person an an eye witness account, works well...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Georg, you have such wisdom,itcomes through most especially when you show some humanity up for the fools they are...A splendid write!

A blessed and Happy Easter to you and yours!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
A beautiful write Georg, thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed on March 21, 2008
George,
Your Words Are Lovely.
This write is still true today in the sense that what is being looked for sometimes is not unfound at all, it is right in front of us.
Embraced~Embrasse'
Happy Easter
Vickie

Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Georg "Walking Feet Going Nowhere" religious facts presented through your interpretation. Wonderful writing bidding you a most blessed holiday season.

Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Superb! Emotional and spiritual. Your recount is exceptional and touched my heart. praise His name!
Richard

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Walking, searching but looking in all the wrong places and expecting to see that which is not there. They should have been seeing with their heart and mind, rather than their eyes. Spiritually wonderful piece....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Nothing new on the western, - ah easter nnnn front font, many wearing out good shoe leather, and are starved like you! Wonderful Easter writhe my friend! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
I normally do not review "religious works" for personal reasons but as I continue to study the history of religions, for example I am reading The Hiram Key at present, this write was fascinating. It gave a depictation that even an agnostic like myself could appreciate.
Thank you Georg
Fee

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
This is a most inspiring poem for today, Good Friday. So often we don't see our King, despite Him being right in front of us. My friend, you have a beautiful heart and soul!

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Georg - One of your best yet. I like the way you wrote this Easter poem without falling into the traps of sentimentality and cliche. I like the way you let the events speak for themselves. Enjoyed it very much. - David

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Many walk with open eyes but yet are blind to what they see. Hope you open some blinded eyes with this powerful poem.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
...you unfold the story for us...and everywhere...unspoken soles will soon weep...
John

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
I loved the second to the last stanza... a part of the story we rarely hear about.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Oh what he saw was chilling. What an inspiration write. You gave me more to pondermy friend. Thank you for this poem, especially today. Love, Bonnie


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