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Give me Wonderland...
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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Like a orphan destituted child you wake up in wonderland...you don't want it to end, to go away, to abandon you inside those gray walls which only have the faint sound of tears running down the cheeks.


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I woke up in a strange and unknown land
after sleeping hundred years in one go,
new flowers all around with happiness,
a busy breeze working on a tender song.

Far way, on a recent ploughed expanse
a man walking behind his horse I saw,
sounds of earth being moved, smell of
something fresh, like bread from a plough.

The skies were absolutely pristine clean,
of angry fires weren’t spoiled with smog,
and a peaceful silence overhung on cribs
because around here they hadn’t a war.

Then, I was afraid of sudden all going away,
a beloved and peaceful new discovered world,
I didn’t want to enter again inside the old one,
so, I went to sleep another hundred years more.



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 Reviews of "Give me Wonderland..."
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on April 2, 2008
Very nice!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this: 'I didn't want to enter again inside the old one, so, I went to sleep another hundred years more.'
Liana Margiva

Reviewed on March 28, 2008
George,
This Is A beautiful Fairy Tale Type Write!
I enjoyed your wonderland awakening the sleepy dreamer
Embrasse'
Vickie

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Ah...such exquisite beauty you paint...can I follow you there?

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Excellent writing sweet man,stay safe and well...missed ya...HUgssssssss

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Georg - Liked your Wonderland. The lines,

sounds of earth being moved, smell of
something fresh, like bread from a plough.

sent me back to my childhood, smelling the amazing aroma of freshly plowed earth. - Thanks. - David

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Wow I love the magic of this land!!
I felt like Alice in wonder land
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and hugsssss...Morning Star

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
...a land of wonder...makes many wish...perhaps we should all be sleeping.
excellent Georg...
John

Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Made me feel I was a part of the Wizard of Oz; fantastic!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed on March 25, 2008
A Wizard of Oz kind of feel to this, Georg, very well penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Dreams can be so peaceful but do wake up real soon or we will miss you Georg. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Wonderful write Georg! But don't sleep too long, this world would be a desolate place without you.
Love,
annie

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
That's my way of coping...good write. Lady J

Reviewed on March 24, 2008
I'll leave this message for later, cause I won't be around that long to wait another hundred, and I dona wake you my friend, so happy dreams, on second thought you're not on star trek are you, on the holideck, I am just asking, Rufuz shipped you some of old Eds stash maybe, in any case what ever you're doing sounds fine to me. Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
Oh what a lovely place to wake up...now that is a good dream.

Carole~

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
Oh how I wish it was that easy to escape it all. Sometimes it is the world we would like to see that keeps us going for another day. To face the real world can and sometimes is nothing short of a disappointment, well said...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
...oh to abound next to the jabberwock, or converse with the mad[hatters and queens alike]. ..
one of my favourite places to dream; found in your words here.
ness

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
Take me to your wonderland...it sounds wonderful; there, we will sleep for another hundred years together.love holly

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
Our dreams... a welcome escape from reality at times...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
Can I join you??

So much beauty within this dream!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
Sounds lovely,

~D.

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
Lovely. I wish I could visit such places in my sleep. Rebecca

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
Wow sounds like some of the dreams I used to have while smoking black hash and listening to Stairway To Heaven, seriously this is an excellant write and a lot of strong points made.

Fee

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on March 24, 2008
Oh if only we could. What a wonderful thing to wake up to. I love this imaginative write. Terrific write Georg. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed on March 24, 2008
Let me wake there too, this is so beautiful Georg.


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