The answer to a never forgotten words that came with the wind as whispers and made their home in my ear with an echo that won't subside, like a waving hand of Welcome!
You are the woman that I thought of,
standing at the edge of the abyss
looking down at the bottomless fall…
…you were there, inside my mind,
holding me back, grabbing my heart.
You are the woman from a time gone,
the one He so kindly made of tenderness
and that all my life I were looking for.
Hade we meet, being married we had
because He made me to make you smile.
You, the woman my arms want to hold,
and my lips wondering about if your kiss
will taw the iced heart with its warmth…
…that lovers give each other, tears might
let happiness wet our pillow at tender night.
You are not only my friend, mi love,
but the essence of what I ever wished,
a gentle caress that softened my soul.
If anyone ever ask, I wouldn’t never say
that in my little and empty universe
only you are…“the” woman.
George your love language is so powerful. Love your talents and composure. Thanks for this offering. A smile of thanks sparks off for you from the eges of Götenborg
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2008
Not too many men can write like this, but you Georg do it beautifully, love Holly
You finally gave in did you, it's about time, symbol of the white rose is good metaphor my friend, may you swim forever in that romantic river. Blessings! Jasmin Horst
This is a beautiful memorable write Brother
Of that someone special buried deep within
our most valued dream
Like the one for a fisherman that "Got Away"
Peace be be with you
WOW, this is terrific my romantic friend, terrrrrrrrific. What a poem you had in you, what a poem. That woman is lucky and I'll tell her so. Love, Bonnie
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Cryssa
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Fee
Be always safe,
Karen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
How very special, Georg.
~W~
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Of that someone special buried deep within
our most valued dream
Like the one for a fisherman that "Got Away"
Peace be be with you
William
"...standing at the edge of the abyss,
looking down at the bottomless fall...
...you were there, inside my mind,
holding me back, grabbing my heart. ..."
Good thing she did. Otherwise would have missed out on some stunning poetry, as this is. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Ted