You are dreaming, you don't want to wake up, open your eyes and see the ugly face of the solitude with its pungent odor of forgotten old...
We close our eyes and grab the dream by the hems of that etereal fabric, begging it to take us to forever...
Outside my window winter go tiptoeing
like as if it knows that my heart is sad,
white snow like a shroud over my dreams
because she wasn’t here, between my arms.
Christmas came and went with vacillants steps
as my thoughts tried to comfort my heart,
telling me that maybe for once she was happy
and my solitude was a low price to pay for that.
New Year’s coming, turn yet another page,
a fresh one, where delicately she can write
all those words full of tenderness and feelings
which I need in my total ostracism to survive.
She will look at her Christmas tree and discover
that like small candles all my kisses are alight
to dissipate any shadows trying for her face
with the brightest flames of my unending love.
Winter Roses are shedding tears made of dew,
who said that flowers can’t be happy and smile?
She just called, trying to rescue me from myself
with the most tender words that make me Alive ! ! !
Such tender dream, one that I would want to go on forever. Life is meaningless when you stop dreaming, as long as love burns within your heart, you'll find that it is beautiful to be alive.
Happy New Year Georg, and may 2009 bring you good luck, peace and contentment of the heart.
And with this awesomely composed Poetic piece
You my brother say farewell to yet another year
wishing the incoming one will be better than
The one fading before you.....
Peace be with you Brother Georg
Happy New Year
HOW BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!! AND VERY SAD!!!!!!!!!! BUT THIS IS ONE OF THE POEMS, WHICH WILL LIVE CENTURY AFTER CENTURY, AND READERS WILL FILL HEAVENLY BEAUTY OF YOUR WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! There are o lot of TALENTED POETS in this WORLD, but nobody can write better, than YOU, GEORG MATEOS!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU CAN TRUST ME!!!!!!!! IF ONLY I COULD FIND WORDS, IF ONLY I COULD EXPLAIN, HOW MUCH I LOVE YOUR SENTENCES!!!!!!!!!!!! MAY GOD WILL BRING HAPPINESS IN YOUR HEART EVERY DAY IN YOUR LONG LIFE!!!!!!!!! MAY YOUR NAME, GEORG MATEOS, WILL LIVE IN THIS WORLD FOREVER WITH YOUR HEAVENLY POETRY!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Love the ending, and sounds like the start of a very good New Year!
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
Isn't it awesomely wonderful how a special voice, a few loving words, can refurbish our self-imagined exclusion from the arms of life? I know this one well, Edvard, and you said it beautifully. Happy New Year, ya ole rascal :-)
You have truly outdone yourself with this stunning verse. Yes, you are definently alive..and I feel alive after reading your precious words. Thanks George, you are HOT!
How fluidly this flows and entrapps the imagination into a world beyond all the known realities. Time for all those unhappy roses to lift their petals and feel the warmth of the sun....
Nice...indeed Georq this one is truly a work of love and of the heart...I hope your New Years finds you close enought to smell the perfume of the one you desire most.
So Georg are you coming over? I need to know, because my winter roses are tired of shedding dewy tears. What an amazingly romantic poem. Who ever she is, she is one lucky lady.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Georg, This poem is a powerful write. It is lined with words of regret and a broken heart. Yet love and desire runs through the heart that is indeed alive.
I am so happy to know you are alive Georg, with a write such as this you have to be. Thank you for sharing and I wish you the best through The New year.
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage as she is…whether they wa
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage as she is…whether they wa
Cryssa
Happy New Year Georg, and may 2009 bring you good luck, peace and contentment of the heart.
Be well,
Sheri
You Are A Poetic Word Smith
Much Love & Blessing Georg
Vickie
You my brother say farewell to yet another year
wishing the incoming one will be better than
The one fading before you.....
Peace be with you Brother Georg
Happy New Year
William
Ted
Happy New Year
Be always safe,
Karen
fee
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Carole~
Love,
Becca~
Cheers,
Dan
May 2009 be much kinder to you; you deserve it!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Christine
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Newfie hugs, Rose
Edwin