Last Dance (poem) by Taylor Ryan on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2007

The last dance is reserved for you Ms. Taylor Ryan by a Romantic Dark Knight-excellent poetry

Reviewed on March 20, 2007

This SO thoroughly entrances and engulfs me that I [CANNOT] begin to describe in simple language what it does to me; and even in complex discourse, I would struggle to embody the fullness of emotion encompassed by this scintillating and dare I say stunning jewel of literary prosaic poetry. Keep up the increible work! -- Jeff

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on February 24, 2007

Fantastic!!

Indulge me in your secret spaces.

Capture me in your romance.

Share this love within memory's eye

As we have met in centuries before,

tinted by the innocence of your first view

in turquoise pendulumed twilight�

and when the past becomes familiar,

we will find new places of our own.

What bliss :) pax A

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on February 22, 2007

Fabulous write, had me sittin on the edge of my seat...and did you?
:):)

Love Ch'erie

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

Quite simply breathtaking. The levels and profundity to this work are astounding and I defy anyone not to be moved deeply by this stirring poetry. I feel there is little that I can add other than to say that I gained so much from this write ...you read my heart sometimes Tay and that scares me...as you once said parallel paths. Applause and ovation. Love Panda :)xox

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

Smooth and well penned Taylor. Enjoyed

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Taylor you are not here often enough, but oh when you are it is pure joy!!! You have become a poet imbued with romantic vision! This poem is magnificent , thank you for sharing it, so I can keep it;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Such tentativeness and delicateness is woven into these superb lines Blueberry. You never cease to captivate as you grow and fulfill your mandate as an exceptionally romantic visionary. Who is this muse? I hope you are well and healthy!

Light and Wisdom ...

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

passion sweet, the last dance ...is beautiful

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

The warmth of a romantic weaves its way through the poem.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

I have read and re-read "Last Dance" three times.

First line, first Stanza: He asked...
" " second " : Does he realize
" " third " : He asked if
NOW, the closing lines:

"Now ask me once again if I love you...
or is it I who should ask you?
Will you save your last dance for me?"

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Considering all the abstract, symbolism and surrealism, I can't see how this man appears on the closing lines.

I will read it again tomorrow. maybe my eyes are failing me tonight.

Respectfully,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Has all the stay-poppin elegance and subliminal soulish heat of Jane Austen, and I like the journalistic quality of the Voice. Timeless romance here, Taylor and has your signature all over it: that of sublime imagery and metaphor that is so stunningly visual and apposite. I am so in awe of your ability to write loooooooonger poems. 16 lines seems to be my max! :)) Wonderfully paced and spaced. TY K xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

One of your very best...thanks for sharing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

I absolutely and totally loved this...just a beautiful rendering from your pen! Your poetry is always so worth waiting for!!
love, Myrna

Reviewed by Jennifer Butler (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

As soon as my mother gets out of my head, as soon as the fat one who sang is cow dead, I'll put off the beef and find my relief in the arms of my dance partner, then off to bed.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Taylor,

Yes, the very last. This was a beautiful passionate write my friend. After that no one need ask the question, "do you love me?"

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

with a love so profound
it pales in the simile of the sunshine

Quite a passionate piece, Taylor.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 14, 2007

warm & passionate sentiment dances through this poem ...

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on February 14, 2007

Taylor one of your best.
Happy Valentines Day!
Joselyn

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)

Reviewed on February 14, 2007

I have to agree with Mr. Broome's comments. This poem exemplifies the amazing power of the written word. I sense a huge emotional and intimate love force surging within these words and lines. It is powerful! The power lies in the ability of the poet to expertly use words to convey honestly those deepest innermost feelings within each of us and touch the heart of the reader. As Mr. Broome points out, you have created no illusion here. It is a compelling and "convincing" expression of love and you should be pleased and proud of what you have accomplished. You are a most talented young lady and I am simply smitten by your poetic prowess.

~Butch

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 14, 2007

The eternal dance is much more than swaying...it is the beat of the heart that provides the rhythm and the tune in the heart that pulses with the music. Love is a infused with passion here, Taylor and I soooo understand this calling. You have my best for Valentine's Day. Dance on.
love,
Susan

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on February 14, 2007

Taylor - Now, From a man's viewpoint - mmmm, er, ah, that is....
I'm just melted butter after reading your poem. It's a masterful thing, covering so many aspects of love and the way love is expressed.

Such gorgeous and love ladened words, expertly strung together
to create, not an illusion, but convincing, more powerfully than
Tony lay on Cleo or Juliet bared before Romeo. History making!

Know this; you've created a new and distant benchmark for the
rest of us. Thank you, Talented Lady. - Bill

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on February 14, 2007

This is a beautiful portrait of love.

Reviewed by Erin Woods

Reviewed on February 14, 2007

Dearest Taylor...You've out done yourself...if that is possible...I agree with Katherine ...and the tears are still flowing...Thank you for this beautiful read....Happy Valentines Day...love,erin

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 14, 2007

Taylor, Taylor, now this is romance my dear, and written with such excellence! Bravo! in adoration, Holly

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 14, 2007

Love's sentiments flow freely thoughout your verses here, Taylor. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on February 14, 2007

Such a beautiful write my friend, one that leaves a thought lingering within my mind and heart...soft, and romantic...loved this!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Happy Valentine Day

Reviewed by Katherine Chandler

Reviewed on February 14, 2007

My dear Taylor, still wiping tears away, reading your beautiful sentiments over and over. This has to be the most breathtaking love poem I have ever read. Even Dickenson pales to comparison after reading your words of love and passion. From the quote to the graphic, the love I find within each verse brought not only tears, but such incredible joy to my heart for you and your loved one. Happy Valentine's Day sweet friend. With love, Katherine

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on February 14, 2007

oh, my goodness!! Tayor, this is sublime!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on February 14, 2007

*sigh*...Your thoughts flow effortlessly and caress the page, indulging the reader with amazing ambiance

Happy Valentine Day