Beautiful Morning To You Taylor "Awakening (Senryu" is poetic beauty embracing the heart & soul of poetry
Very Lovely & Eloquent Piece
Peace, Love & Poetry
Much Love To You
Embraced~ Embrassé
Vickie
I love haiku. I love these, Taylor. The image that you have chosen very effectively complements your own lovely painting of words. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,
What a vibrant awakening this Senryu trinity is for the reader to enjoy! You have not lost your touch, dear Taylor. The photo you have chosen to accompany this piece could not be more perfect. It is wonderful to be able to read your work again!
~Butch
This flows like a clear stream and, like the spaces between heartbeats, the imagery exudes creations mysteries. There is a satisfying mutualism you've created, dearest Taylor, between image and content in this.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard
How beautiful and solftly presented. It is printed in my mind, and that is always god poetry. You have the touch, and your pen needs to be more active.
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Personal - I've been away for two weeks; getting the old body ready for the nest decade. Carotid artery surgery, and a pacemaker for longevity! Am on the mend,, after many flirtations with all the wonderful nurses and aids. But, I don't recommend it for time off. Am mending nicely. With love, - Bill
Taylor, it's been too long...we need to see you here more often...Awakening is a spectacular geographic fusion of poetry's quill which coalesces with the sensual outline of nature's colorful vista of rebirth...every morning when we awaken...I see a woman's shapely figure in this mountain line (breasts) with veils layering the sky...see-through peek of spiritual awakening in the dance of clouds...it's poetry like this that stimulates our senses and motivates us to live each day to its fullest to be gifted with awakening each day with the serene self-certainty of creation's mystery...have a great fall season, Taylor...
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
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But then there must be coffee :-)
Walt
Your pen flows with solemn truth and profoundness.
Nice to read you again.
Love
Peter
Very Lovely & Eloquent Piece
Peace, Love & Poetry
Much Love To You
Embraced~ Embrassé
Vickie
Regis
~Butch
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard
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Personal - I've been away for two weeks; getting the old body ready for the nest decade. Carotid artery surgery, and a pacemaker for longevity! Am on the mend,, after many flirtations with all the wonderful nurses and aids. But, I don't recommend it for time off. Am mending nicely. With love, - Bill
hugs and love, Myrna
Love,
Sage