A beautifully flowing and satisfying syntax is created here blueberry. Kudos to both of you!
Light and Wisdom ...
Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2007
Hey tay, nice to see your name at authors den, this collab!Wow, shows an eclipsing of the heart, as love forms a shadow of intentions
over two souls glimpsing eternity, loved the vision of this piece,
keep up the good work and look forward to reading more from you my friend, always, mike
outstanding work here my friend. I have already left a note to Butch by the by.
A good collab. is not easy but you two made it look so.
The blend of your styles, voices and imagery is seamless and lovely.
Magnetic and yet beautifully poised and weighted. Such elegance woven into this planetary romance. It seems to place my thought and feelings onto a cusp, and yet causes them also to relax as if into a feather-bed. This is the stuff of sighs! :)) Thank you both... a wonderful tandem write that runs smooth and well-oiled, Kate xx
What a privelege it is to have the opportunity to read a poem like this collaboration with you, Taylor, and you Butch. The mention of Solis and Luna made me smile -- and these lines are so moving: "we remain steadfast sweltry beams shared between two in dawn’s soft ménage" This is pure romance at its finest, my friends. Simply put, 'a feel good' blend of ink. Love, Katherine
The proper response to this Haiku/Senryu is that there is a beautiful balance growing out from the green shoots rising out of ancient wood. This is a soulful communion shared between two souls who I see want to not only deepen their impressionistic style of poetry to share with their readers, but also deepen their commitment with each other, bonding through the written word...this is art and it tells the truth of the day...integrating poetry from two minds, one soul...Blessed Be.
What a privelege to be allowed the opportunity to collaborate with Butch Howard on this vision ...in his signature style.
My deepest thanks,
Love,
Taylor
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Light and Wisdom ...
over two souls glimpsing eternity, loved the vision of this piece,
keep up the good work and look forward to reading more from you my friend, always, mike
A good collab. is not easy but you two made it look so.
The blend of your styles, voices and imagery is seamless and lovely.
Chanti
Myrna
Very meaningful and enriching.
Terry
Very well done!!
Love tinka
Kudos, You Two!
Beautiful set of poetic excellence and sublime feelings.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Thank you both for sharing these beauty's!
Love,
Eileen
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Your collabs are outstanding
Thanks for sharing
Peace
William
Sage
What gorgeous haiku: stunning collection; each stanza stands on its own merit, but all combined comprise a most wonderous collection! Perfection!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
My deepest thanks,
Love,
Taylor
~Butch Howard