Jack on the Loose (poem) by Ronald W. Hull on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

I loved this! I could hear the music as I read! excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2004

Hey, Ron? Will a piano do? The very VERY first word that came to my mind here was 'infectious'... and then it just snowballed!! This is one damned great bunch of potential for a tune. After the first 2 lines, I was reading aloud.. it just begs for that! What a great piece you've penned. You know what a sucker I am for wordplay and snappy rhyme.. Well, THIS IS IT! Wonderful! katy xox.

Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)

Reviewed on January 8, 2004

Exceptionally beautiful.

Greetings.

Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2004

a tickling play on words!
and i like the image with it

(knats) gnats???
jessica
aka
gypsie

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on November 8, 2003

Is it supposed to be funny?
Well, maybe I got something wrong. I thought it is scary.
Nevertheless, a joy to read.
Nico

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Oh, Ron - too much fun to be had reading this. Love it!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Lively piece that's fun to read.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

This is a great song! Think you got the beat Ron. This was a joy to read.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Ronald this is definitely a song....loved it..floria

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Well I was singing it Ronald! Great images, wonderful rhythm, superb lyrics!So get a guitar;-)!Superb!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Most interesting write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

I love the beat of this poem Ron...You bring some fantastic images to mind...Very fine work....As you do! Loved it, ty, Dani

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

I won't hire that Jack leg...
I don't know where thaat phrase comes from
A fun write Ronald.......

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

this is so clever!!! I am smiling! You have a GREAT PUMPKIN CHARLIE BROWN sense of humor!!!
love it
pax
A
muu haaaaa haaaaaaaaaa

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

I enjoyed this :) Perfect for this time of year...perfect timing. I am with Kate here 110%! This is really FUN. Read it to my little guy as well (5)...we have been reading together lots lately. I enjoyed ...he giggled and really liked it as well :) To that, I say... fine work!

Thank You,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

You made me smile Ronald! Thanks... Rodd

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

This really kept my interest. Quite lively, and quite good!

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Jack got me "all" jacked up. LOL!

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

I think you've got too many pumpkin seeds left in your pie. (or too many hard ciders) **S** What a lively write. Loved the rhythm, energy and humor of this piece.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

This is a great lively play with words that keeps the reader tapping their toes while indigesting the thoughts. Great write!