As Your Fear No Happiness Nor Fullfillment Comes... (poem) by - - - - - -

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on August 3, 2003

interesting trask, it do seem like you worked in electronics, you write in a computerized manner. G

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

Thank you for sharing this trask,
awesome ...a good teacher can make all the difference,glad you had one,glad you are here to shine your light.
Best wishes
from
kay.

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

Those times are quite a while ago, but I stil remember very well.
Good one Trask.
Enjoyed reading it.
Nico

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

Ah Dear Trask, You have what we call an old soul...beautiful,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

Teaches can inspire or terrorize, but they always leave a lasting impression on a young mind. Excellent.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on August 1, 2003

My English teacher was so kind to me when I was a kid...he encouraged me to keep writing...thus I did...This is a great piece Trask....Thank you....Dani

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 31, 2003

my teacher always rubbed my nose to the blackboard with her one hand on my ear and the other hand on my neck....and told me to rub it in..rub it in....and get it into your head dammit...lol!!

Great write Trask!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2003

Great sharing of both memory and philosophy, TRASK! Excellent delivery and lots to think about when the reader reflects on their own inspirational experiences...!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 31, 2003

You had a great teacher who saw goodness in you. Wonderful write TRASK!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2003

Ahhhh. Those blackboards. Stood in front of many in my day. Yup...with you there.

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on July 31, 2003

You had an angel for a teacher
my friend. She saw the light
you have inside of you to write.
To show the world your soul.
Keep writing and making your
voice heard. You are amazing.

Yf
~~Linda~~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 31, 2003

The teacher deserves your praise to have encouraged the gift of writing she saw in you. Well done Trask!

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2003

I remember bullies in my youthful days too

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on July 31, 2003

True, so true, TRASK! You were an old spirit in a young body! Thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear