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Beauty
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This is the oldest poem I wrote when I was 13 years old


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Beauty is what God did send,
To start his life in paradise land.
With a man He made of his own kind,
And to him gave the name Adam.

In that day of land of beauty,
Was a forbidden Tree of Life.
Which Adam and His mate were
Forbidden to thought or or eat
Or he and she would surely die.

But Eve gave a bite to Adam,
To eat of the Tree of Knowledge,
And it came that Adam and Eve were made
Back to the earth and field from God.
Even since then,

We're decendants from them,
For we all are new born sinners
and know not how to be reborn in Him.
This is what God has created,

That we shall be free to worship Him,
And one day soon we shall find Him,
The beauty of love of the Father shall begin.   

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 Reviews of "Beauty"
Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on October 27, 2006
An incredible write for age thirteen back then. Ask a thirteen-year-old today what they think of Creation, they will most likely look at you and say "Haugh! Do you mean Harry Potter?" Well done, Sharon, age 13! :)

God Bless
Lena

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
You've related the story beautifully -- and at only 13 years old! Very impressive, Sharon.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed on October 20, 2006
Wow you were just 13 when you wrote this and now compare it to what you write now. It is all the same about the one who loves us so much my friend. God bless you.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 17, 2006
Obviously, this was a fine start and you were well on your way. Thank you for sharing this gift, Sharon. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on October 16, 2006
Wow, Sharon, at that young age, you had a lot on the ball! A fine poem; very well and expertly penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on October 16, 2006
Beautiful poem and very true my friend.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on October 16, 2006
13.......and so mature in wisdom and beauty. Well done, my friend!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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