I love the way this poem flows, what " A special delight "
Very relaxing indeed and so real! Thank you Karen for sharing
and caring. Please tell Robert to keep up the good art work
with his camera, the pictures are so beautiful with your poems.
What a blessing to see both of you work together so beautifully,
I admire you both for working together! God bless you both!
I enjoyed this poem, especially this: Lean over the side,
run your hands in the sea.
Signaling all the fish,
to come play with me.
It is a poem which reminds me of the carefree days of summer, as I take time to enjoy the sea and all that the sea has to offer! Excellent poem. As usual, your words have touched my heart.
Karen a day of heaven. I drifted away the imagery of this beautiful poem. Just the sound of the waves clasping against the boat and the seagulls. A beautiful day imagined.
This is awesome prose. I just love sailboats and the sea. Haven't been on one in a long time but reading your prose and seeing your photo makes me feel I'm there again. Thanks for sharing, Gloria
Pic and poem go hand in hand beautifully! A real emotive poem, you have me ready to set sail...so when we leaving? I enjoyed reading this piece and am glad I dropped on by!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by M T (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2007
Vivid and inspiring. I have many plans with my soon to be future bride and this poem inspires me and makes me look forward all the more. Thanks.
Reviewed by Faten Abdallah (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2007
Reading this poem brings back memories, yet belongs in one of my dreams for the future. It is truly "A Special Delight."
That poem brings back memories from when I was a kid. Back then, Terminal Island, near Long Beach, was one of the best beaches for camping overnight and burning our hides in the sun. Later on, I used to work shift work which gave me many days when I could play in the surf near Belmost Shores.
Love cruisin' the waves but on the east coast instead of the west...someday I would like to visit the Pacific ocean...sail on, captain, my captain...Ed
Karen you awakened the longing for the sea in my soul. Gorgeous poem.
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2007
I love the way you have characterized the invigorating beauty of nature here. There are few things in life I love more than getting in my boat, kayak, or canoe and experiencing the wonder of the ocean, observing the many species of birds and seeing the fish jump. Your words motivate me to make my way down the dock, knock the cobwebs off the boat and hit the high seas for some much needed relaxation and enjoyment. Excellent write!
~Butch
Wow I truly enjoyed this great
Journey along the coast and breeze on my face
And that sound of the sea and the seagulls flying above!!
I love the journey you have taken us to I love it
Thanks for this great Vacation enjoyed very much!!
Love And Peace to you Always
Your Friend...Morning Star
Oh this sounds so "delightful" and I'd give anything
for some warm weather at this point. Sometimes I
wonder if winters ever going to end. This brings
some beautiful thoughts to my mind.
This cold morning this filled me with warmth and joy as I visioned all the beautiful images you brought to life in this poem. I could feel the water against your fingers and see the flipping fish...you have brought this piece to life.
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2007
You write a perfect day. beautiful picture also. Makes me remember when I lived by the shore and would go down just to watch the last bit of sun reflect off the water. On the east coast it's a little different. The sun sets over land and the reflection of the still waters gives it an emeral iridescent glow. Lady J
Karen,
This left me wanting to ditch class and go fishing! Yeah, I know..not a good idea but one worth pondering anyway.
Enjoyed the sun and fun, and the photo and poem were both wonderful.
This IS a "Special Delight!" Your imagery had me feeling the wetness of the sea, the tranquility of her purpose,
...and I want warmer weather! :)
This is beautiful Karen~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
This poem takes me to Emingway's "The old man and the sea" and the love of the watered horizon all around, and the battle with the sailfish, the exhilaration of being free over the waves.
Thanks to bring back the memories.
Georg
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2007
I love to sit and watch the sun melt into the sea.
For the most part it is a tranquil poem, until the smart alec fish, lol
The sunset and the beach are a few of the most wonderfull experiences and fortunately I have experienced them along with the ride upon the waters .....
you write well this picture along with your thoughts...
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Very relaxing indeed and so real! Thank you Karen for sharing
and caring. Please tell Robert to keep up the good art work
with his camera, the pictures are so beautiful with your poems.
What a blessing to see both of you work together so beautifully,
I admire you both for working together! God bless you both!
Much Love,
Margaret
run your hands in the sea.
Signaling all the fish,
to come play with me.
It is a poem which reminds me of the carefree days of summer, as I take time to enjoy the sea and all that the sea has to offer! Excellent poem. As usual, your words have touched my heart.
A glorious, delightful poem . . . stunning!!
Best wishes,
Lance
Regis
~Nikki~
Bred as we, among the mountains,
Can the sailor understand
The divine intoxication
Of the first league out from land?
Quite beautiful, thank you. Kate xx
What a beautiful place.
Hank
One day I hope to make it back to the ocean.
Bill
~Butch
Carmen :-)
Journey along the coast and breeze on my face
And that sound of the sea and the seagulls flying above!!
I love the journey you have taken us to I love it
Thanks for this great Vacation enjoyed very much!!
Love And Peace to you Always
Your Friend...Morning Star
for some warm weather at this point. Sometimes I
wonder if winters ever going to end. This brings
some beautiful thoughts to my mind.
Beautiful offering brown eyed girl....just like me...lol!!
Love Tinka
Thanks
Dan
This left me wanting to ditch class and go fishing! Yeah, I know..not a good idea but one worth pondering anyway.
Enjoyed the sun and fun, and the photo and poem were both wonderful.
Lisa
...and I want warmer weather! :)
This is beautiful Karen~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
sacred and pristine,
A special delight to behold,
by all should be seen.
A delightful poem, Karen, and a wonderful reminder of just how glorious a day spent in the midst of nature can truly be.
Hugs, Laura
Thanks to bring back the memories.
Georg
For the most part it is a tranquil poem, until the smart alec fish, lol
Eileen
Good job!
Elizabeth
you write well this picture along with your thoughts...
nicely expressed.....
enjoyed.....Art Sun...
This. Is. GLORIOUS! I love the beach; I love sunsets; combined, what a beautiful sight. Well done!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D