I amble along By a rippling stream Just before twilight Pondering my Ephemeral dream What seems like A gossamer apparition Walks beside me I feel as if there were A fog hovering near Hoping it would clear As hush of night appears
A mellifluous melody Spun in my mind As his face so kind Showed luminous Through the stars That covered us In my dream of how Our love had grown From a source unknown Yet, we are forever Joined as meant to be Not always perfect harmony
Still blessed within Our mutual satisfaction Knowing from eons before It will be perfected once more
Have you ever tried to reverse them? That's so funny I laughed myself into hysteria doing that with "Constant sorrow...will mail you that if you like to listen okay..BIGSMILES!!
Dear Eileen,
Would perfect harmony not be a blend of shadows and light, brewed in understanding and then imbibed unconditionally? This beautiful cup of a Luminous Love that you share with us, gives me the warm feeling that you do know the secret of that magical blend...
Many sips of Love&Light*
Alexandra*
This poem "A luminous love" illuminates the soul with rays of romance that deeply penetrate the hearts of those who wish to live with love. a beautifully crafted poem.GBQ
Abdi-Noor
A delightful love poem to end my night and relish any dreams it produces. An artist fills his canvas with colors of paint, you fill yours with words that produces colorful words in ones imagination.
This is oh such a beautiful write! I read it over and over again ..with the lovely pix and music. You write incredible poetry always. Thanks for sharing. :-) shoma
You allow so much of life's beauty and pain fill you and become your muse. I feel that you "breathe in" words that fit perfectly together. Another wonderful write from you, Dear Eileen.
I could not take my eyes off the image at first. then I read the poem, twice. makes me want to sit down and hear all the details of your inspiration. lovely and luminous indeed. Dawn
Beautiful poem, graphic and music, Eileen, they mesh together perfectly. Perfect love does always seem to be fleeting, doesn't it. We find it and we cherish it but as it and we evolve, there are bumpy spots in the road where the trueness of the love seems to get lost in the frustration of the moment. Our foucus must be on the distance and not upon the immediate as you have so beautifully stated in this amazing poem.
Another tender and loving verse from the mistress of sublime writes...superb Eileen.
Paul;-}
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2005
"Joined as meant to be / Not always perfect harmony" Great two lines. You do understand how to arrange the words, do you not, Eileen? Oh, you were among the few that "got" my poem, but then, you always do.
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love and peace, Carole
Beautiful!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
piece Eileen!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Reindeer
What wonderful imagery in this poem
whispered so beautifully upon the page.
Love & Light,
Joseph
Enjoyed your readings....sounded spooky...did you
echoed your recordings???
Have you ever tried to reverse them? That's so funny I laughed myself into hysteria doing that with "Constant sorrow...will mail you that if you like to listen okay..BIGSMILES!!
Love Tinka
Peace,
Carolyn
Would perfect harmony not be a blend of shadows and light, brewed in understanding and then imbibed unconditionally? This beautiful cup of a Luminous Love that you share with us, gives me the warm feeling that you do know the secret of that magical blend...
Many sips of Love&Light*
Alexandra*
Abdi-Noor
Take care,
Sherry
Paul;-}
Carmen :-)