I couldn't chase the feel of fondling That arose as the misty morn kept me In bed under covers chasing dreams For the first time in a long while
Thoughts swam around in my brain juices And played with the palpitating patterns of My imagination which ran rampant in riotous Colors, as I felt an intensity ignite my id
Magical motions ministered with devotion From some enchanting unseen apparition There ensued a delightful labyrnthine dance So serpentine my brain was entranced
Who would believe that an ordinary daydream Could become one of wild, whimsical play That by the time it was over I was floating On a cloud, and you were calling to me Asking for directions on how to get here
etw-2005
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Reviewed by White Dove left (Reader)
Reviewed on December 13, 2005
Wonderful and splendid....!!!What a creative mind you have..I wish I could write like that...
Hey! I thought this was gonna be one uh dem kinky poems. LOL. Great poem, Eileen. Full of imagination. You're so creative, ahhh the Piscean brain again. :-) ~~Nordette
Dreams, especially those that come during the time we are awake, are the main sources of imagination. Without them the engine of creativity can never be fueled.Wondeful poem. GBQ
Abdi-Noor
I am smiling at your delghtful beautiful poem...lady you sure can write!
Eileen thank you so much for your sweet words on my new poem,(I finally wrote a new one)you are always so good to me with your comments of your treasured (by me)encouragement...hugs to you.
Best wishes always
love from
kay.
LOL!!! loved that last line, Eileen! This is a stunning write, I loved every bit of it. I think that daydreams can even be more fun than reality, sometimes. We can stretch ourselves in ways that we probably never would in the real world and we also have total control over all others we place within them...gotta go, my brain is churning and I am feeling the heat rising...LOL
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Carole...love and peace
Hank
Abdi-Noor
Eileen thank you so much for your sweet words on my new poem,(I finally wrote a new one)you are always so good to me with your comments of your treasured (by me)encouragement...hugs to you.
Best wishes always
love from
kay.
wonderful poem, ET ...
William ......Love & Peace
Happy Holidays
Carmen :-)
Take care,
Sherry