Like sunlight flickering in rays through a curtain making everything take on an apricot glow like the fingering of notes on a harp that seem to flutter like a butterfly like the gentle shimmering of silver moonlight over a midnight lake this is how you make me feel when you speak your poetic words over my body you anoint me with your breath of endearment and delight me with the touch of your lips running your unique poems rampant over my eager frame that refuses to be tame so you satisfy me with the ritual of rhyme bringing me into the essence of prime and as I watch the amber moon you whisper over my breasts a pantoum you allow free verse to play over me like a cello and bring to fruition a sumptuous sonnet while I whisper to you a seductive Haiku and together we senryu...;-)
Eileen, You've done it again girl friend! A real jewel.
Huggs
Tina
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2005
You continue to wow the folks of AD, this one is a prime example of why that is.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2005
It is very romantic n all. But so clever is the way you can write without need of punctuation. That is masterful. I'm always attempting it.. Gotta keep this as a kinda template to learn from.
Most masterful craftsmanship indeed..
This is absolutely beautiful and breathtaking Eileen
A sheer delight to read..you are excelling yourself in recent writes and compositions Eileen !
And yes George is right, that is a glorious sunset
Love
Peter
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
Selected poems from previous & forthcoming collections together with Q&R apps on each page to enable audio rendition simultaneously with the written text
Happy New Year my friend!!
Love Tinka
Carole...love and peace
and together we senryu...;-)
WOW!
Huggs
Tina
Most masterful craftsmanship indeed..
Sage
Great piece Eileen
Loved it
William
Love & Peace
Carmen :-)
A sheer delight to read..you are excelling yourself in recent writes and compositions Eileen !
And yes George is right, that is a glorious sunset
Love
Peter