Like an arrow shot from heaven the hawk descended landing on the roof across from me I thought it would go through the roof it had come with such force, so beautiful it lifted off almost immediately back up to where it had come from so high almost out of sight
Red hawks usually descend only into nests to catch their prey, baby birds they circle high, until they spot what they want, they make their dive causing a furor as all the lesser birds try to scare the hawk off by diving into it only rarely do the birds scare it away
This is how some mortals operate and those they swoop down and dally with usually wind up defeated or even dead the sad thing is they keep getting away with it with the hawk it's natural, they must eat but humans do it out of a sick need for power to wear as trophies, of all their conquests
Powerful and creative write Eileen, in my line of work I run across more of these human predators everyday, very sad indeed!
love and peace...
Carole
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2006
Beautiful picture. I see hawks all day long in the mountain wash behind my home. Good analogy too. Predators are where you least expect to find them and where one SHOULD feel safe and protected, in one's home and their faith. Sad world.
"until they spot what they want, they make their dive
causing a furor as all the lesser birds try to scare the hawk off by diving into it only rarely do the birds scare it away."
Enough said!
Sage
Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2006
have never understood human predators, this is a powerful write Lady Eileen.
Wel those mortals, as with all, have the boss to reckon with.
But our Hawk fighter plane is a dynamic bird...
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2006
Yep. Animals are smarter than us. Must be. Everyone says it is so. Beautiful poem. Animals. Super intelligent, just ask Flipper. Or Lassie. The Nipperdawg.
Eileen, this takes me back to when I'd see red-shouldered hawks in Ohio. Beautiful, thought provoking write! Well done, dear! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2006
Yes, well, the animal world is on a balance that I doubt most humans will ever understand, though it seems like you do. I LLLLLLLOVED the photo, I love watching hawks here, too, flying and swooping.
Hi Eileen:
In nature, pecking orders are established intra-species, often in not so gentle ways. When it comes to inter-species competition cruelty has little recognition nor bounds, other than a rare outcropping of empathy. Civilization is the nurturing of empathy.
Love,
Leland
Very fine metaphorical write that exposes the hypocrisy and cynicism
of those who prey on other's feelings and vulnerabilities !
I believe in the Cosmic Wheel and Karma Eileen, and firmly believe what goes round, must come back again, just like a comet in its elliptical circumnavigation of the Universe 1
Those who practise those misdemeanours will receive their full punishment in the fullness of time !
Beautiful picture of a beautiful red tailed hawk !
I have seen many of those magnificent creatures in California !
Peter
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love and peace...
Carole
Thoughtful work.
Best,
Elizabeth
Paul;-)
causing a furor as all the lesser birds try to scare the hawk off by diving into it only rarely do the birds scare it away."
Enough said!
Sage
Love Tinka
But our Hawk fighter plane is a dynamic bird...
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Excellent poem that expresses why feathered and furred creatures are oftentimes better than humans. Sad to say this is true...well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
In nature, pecking orders are established intra-species, often in not so gentle ways. When it comes to inter-species competition cruelty has little recognition nor bounds, other than a rare outcropping of empathy. Civilization is the nurturing of empathy.
Love,
Leland
of those who prey on other's feelings and vulnerabilities !
I believe in the Cosmic Wheel and Karma Eileen, and firmly believe what goes round, must come back again, just like a comet in its elliptical circumnavigation of the Universe 1
Those who practise those misdemeanours will receive their full punishment in the fullness of time !
Beautiful picture of a beautiful red tailed hawk !
I have seen many of those magnificent creatures in California !
Peter