Live Dreams (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 11, 2006

I always enjoy your work

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2006

Dear Eileen,

You've done a wonderful job with this form! I really liked this passage: "the beauty in a moment
can change an entire life
yet often we keep our eyes averted
seeking material things
or trying to catch the ephemeral
when all around us is true wonder"

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 7, 2006

Well, neologize is definitely a new word under the sun for me... and now I've used it twice - here and on Peter's page today, too! :)) Of all creation, I think the stunning colours in dawn and dusk are perhaps the most awe-inspiring... and how is it that we feel such a sense of privilege to witness them sometimes that we DO indeed believe that such a show has been laid on just for us??! Just goes to show that each sky, each day is as different as each of us... and as special. TY and bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 7, 2006

Absolutely beautiful Eileen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on February 7, 2006

Seems Jerry's started a bit of a craze, and you've got the hang of this Eileen, beautiful enchanting imagery. Love that pic too.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 6, 2006

Great job, Eileen! I am really liking this format because the six-line freestyle verses allow for the writer to tell a complete story and the rhyming lines make for a nice segue from one verse into the next, a lot like chapters in a book. Beautiful words and picture!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2006

That you did.
This is beautiful and the picture is perfect.

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on February 6, 2006

Beautiful work, had a soothing influence on us. Love the pic. too.
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on February 6, 2006

This is so delightful. Your experience seems like a prayer. Wish I could enjoy the mornings. Guess I'll just have to stick with sunsets :>) Beautiful, Eileen.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on February 6, 2006

Dreams and dreaming are to the fore today in the Den, and this is a dream of Intelligent Design, that pours from your page in captivating septcouplet form !
You rock Eileen !
Love the dreamy pic !
Peter

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 6, 2006

You captured a beautiful, enchanting morning with such eloquence Eileen! love and peace...
Carole

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 6, 2006

the beauty in a moment
can change an entire life
yet often we keep our eyes averted
seeking material things
or trying to catch the ephemeral
when all around us is true wonder

WOW, Magnificent, and Brava!!

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2006

as beautiful as a golden dawn!

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on February 6, 2006

Stunning art.
Beautiful as always.
John

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on February 6, 2006

You figured out a god-given beauty in a more majestic and rather classical way. Thanks for this intelligent articulation of thoughts

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2006

The elements and your thoughts on them, as only you can do them, even using a new form does not deter you from doing what you do best, giving the reader a part of your soul. Very good.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on February 6, 2006

Strong imagery and a good read, Eileen. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on February 6, 2006

Eileen,

I'm caught in the rapture of the morning. Very well written.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 6, 2006

Eileen,

Dang, you did a graet job here; well done! Take a bow, girlfriend, and pat yourself on the back! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D **applauding**

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on February 5, 2006

Eileen, this is wonderfully done. It is also a great message. How often we forget the simple majesty of the world God gave us. Great Job.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 5, 2006

Eileen,

Your dream lends itself to beautiful verse--stunning work. :) And that pic, GORGEOUS!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 5, 2006

Like many others had done before you, and others that you have done by yourselves...like there's nothing new under the sun...but yet...you have done this sooooo well!!! You have even outdone yourself in this one!

Great endeavour on a new style. I think I will try on this too later.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on February 5, 2006

Awsome! You really brought about the notion of awakening to the realization of a dream. A sunrise, an everyday occurance, yet totally new to the eyes of the poet. Love it! ~~Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2006

So beautifully done!!!!!!!!!!!! I love when my dreams carry over and punch a whole through infinity so I can go on enjoying them
:)