The Massage (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 4, 2006

The message is the massage, or vice versa?

Ron

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

Wonderful!!!

Gina

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

ok i'm just jealous now! excellent write

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

Soothing write----ahhhhh. To me, there is nothing, and I do mean NOTHING better than a massage.

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

A wonderful tempting write!
B&R

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

There's a phallus??? I am not seeing it, Jude, perhaps I am missing something? Anyway, this sounds delightful and like some time well "spent." All that rubbing and caressing...ahhhh...great for the body and the soul. This is both relaxing and stimulating at the same time...Whoo-Hoooo!!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

Ummmm...sounds really nice Eileen. Dang, I could use some of that! Michelle

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

nice erotic stimulation ... did you use the phallic in the pic on purpose? or is that a rhetoricial question? ;)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

i know the feeling...a rubber band is more solid than a person after a good massage. You capture the relaxation complete in words. I'm even more relaxed after the read. You have magic in your poetry.
Susan

Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

Now that's a massage if ere there was one. :) And you dear one have an incredible talent for expressing those things that are felt both in the mind, body and soul. Gees, now I want one...lol...oh my...good day dear friend, good day. :)

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

Mmmmassage indeed...and with a 'happy ending' too! ;)

Enjoyed this.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

You covered the subject well. LOL

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

Ah yes . . . I could feel those ten digits forcing out the lactic acid from the taut striations in anticipation of being nibbled on by what is in the blue bottle.

What the heck is that thing?

It looks like it has glowing eyes.

YIKES!
Richard

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

very erotic.........whats in the blue bottle
and
whatt type oil are you using!! lol
pax A

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

Wonderful Eileen..I wish I could afford one right now, lol..

Peace & Love, Dove

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

Uh, damn, Eileen, you wrought an erotic poem without writing an erotic poem, noe THAT is hard to do, but why am I surprised, look who I'm dealing with heah.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on June 3, 2006

Eileen
You have an incredible way with words, that compliments the
emotions and moods...
A sensuous and irresistable beauty
Peter