A morning walk past a stream I amble along living my dream Birds singing sweet melodies A soft breeze plays with the trees Dappled sunlight amid shifting shadows My mind turns to lifes dualities Ever present throughout all creation Me You, Yin Yan, good bad, high low Wondering does it end in the everlasting What will our future, new life, look like I ask The Word, that dwells amongst us While I wait for an answer I consider The Lilies of the fields how precious The Sparrow that God takes care of All creation that shares His breath of life The beauty on earth just a precursor Of all that is to come, when earth passes I realize these thoughts are His answer As I go my way with joy of purpose I give thanks for what I know, but Even more so for all I have yet to learn
For me, this is a beautiful prayer. I don't know what I would do without your praises to our Lord. The picture is so rich. I wonder if it looks a little like heaven. xxxooo Janet
Truly beautiful Eileen!
"I amble along living my dream"
Keep living your dream ... for you are a Living Bible...(as are we all, when we live the dream!) Superb write; as always!
Blessings!!
Love, Suzie :-D
saw that photo and was overwhelmed with joy and peace, thinking I'd have to give extra attention to be fair to the poem... not the case at all, Eileen. this poem is wise and wonderful and flows through me like a hope and a promise. Dawn
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
Eileen, this beautiful piece reminds me of "God's phone #"
aka Jeremiah 33:3..."Call unto Me, and I will answer thee, and shew thee great and mighty things, which thou knowest not."
Reviewed by Flowing Brook (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
ET, for someone who once declared they are not a poet, you do a fantastic job.
This gracious poem is the perfect start to my busy day,I love it Eileen-yjamk you for these wise words.We are so blessed and you see that,iy is easy to forget the blessings but your poem reminds me.Awesome!
ox
You got it big time when you said, "I realize these thoughts are His answer" because it is up to us to make it all word and understanding comes from within, not from outwardly.
The Word, that dwells among us. His spirit of truth and knowledge guides and keeps you. Keep on rejoicing and sharing. Well said, and to the point, Eileen. The times demand solidity and conviction, to the truth.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
Dear Eileen,
This wonderful verse struck many chords within my heart:
The opening lines bring a smile for the awareness of the beauty of Creation. Then comes the contemplation of Life's dualities. The realization that all Creation shares the same breath of life. Finally, walking in the joy of purpose, giving thanks for gifts already given with a heart that is open to much more.
Eileen
You have joy and wonder that is unimaginable and unsurpassed for those whose names are written in the Book of Life..
Grand write that touches on the Supernatural..
Love and Light
Peter
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love and peace, Carole
"I amble along living my dream"
Keep living your dream ... for you are a Living Bible...(as are we all, when we live the dream!) Superb write; as always!
Blessings!!
Love, Suzie :-D
aka Jeremiah 33:3..."Call unto Me, and I will answer thee, and shew thee great and mighty things, which thou knowest not."
Even more so for all I have yet to learn
And we should all do the very same, Tiger Lily.
Even more so for all I have yet to learn"
How wise, Eileen. Thank you for sharing you gift. Love and peace,
Regis
Love, B&R
ox
Paul;-)
with pen are materful.
Love & Peace
William
This wonderful verse struck many chords within my heart:
The opening lines bring a smile for the awareness of the beauty of Creation. Then comes the contemplation of Life's dualities. The realization that all Creation shares the same breath of life. Finally, walking in the joy of purpose, giving thanks for gifts already given with a heart that is open to much more.
Love & Light,
Joseph
Lin
Xxx dove
You have joy and wonder that is unimaginable and unsurpassed for those whose names are written in the Book of Life..
Grand write that touches on the Supernatural..
Love and Light
Peter